Tiptoe Through the Warming

The toes
of Michelangelo's David
are musculinely strong,
second toe a touch longer
than the big toe
as befits a gifted man.

This is how I walk the earth -
in Michelangelo's toes,
gripping the soil
just hard enough
to keep it steadily waltzing
around the sun
in its Galilean galleon.

My toes tread carefully
among the growing leaves of grass
and upward-glancing, jogging centipedes;
carefully on this oblate earth
with all our growing growing woes
to keep my footprint small,
I walk on my toes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Venter Avatar
November 25, 2008 at 10:03 PM
Hello Christie - it's very nice of you to comment so warmly on my poem. Thanks! :) I will keep posting, but will not flood the site, it can become boring to other readers, I imagine. Enjoy your day.
Venter Avatar
November 24, 2008 at 9:56 PM
Hello Keith - Thanks for all these luxuriant words of praise! I hope the poem will do its microscopic bit to make us all more and more aware of the importance of maintaining our environment. - Enjoy :)
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November 24, 2008 at 9:19 PM
Unique and compelling! Marvelous phrasing and masterful imagery... well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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