Tipsy Night

tipsy night—
searching for the milky way
between double moons



Kashinath Karmakar



http://www.dailyhaiku.org/haiku/2014-december-17

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Richard Lamoureux

April 19, 2020 at 9:25 AM

I struggle with haiku, perhaps I am to verbose. I do however appreciate someone like you who is adept at the form.

Joe Maverick

February 7, 2017 at 8:23 PM

I like the openess of this Kash, It does not restrict imagination yet is true in its message, whether its strict haiku or not, to me how the message trancends physicality is key' So then what is the value of a syllable if it distorts the flow of the, 'message' is not right word 'story' I think suits. As is the story here more congerous with the soul of human understanding than demarcation.' also there is flexibility even in English strict haiku interpertation it is either 575 or 577 syll count.