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Tipsy Night

tipsy night— searching for the milky way between double moons Kashinath Karmakar http://www.dailyhaiku.org/haiku/2014-december-17

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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/19/2020 9:25:00 AM
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I struggle with haiku, perhaps I am to verbose. I do however appreciate someone like you who is adept at the form.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 2/7/2017 8:23:00 PM
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I like the openess of this Kash, It does not restrict imagination yet is true in its message, whether its strict haiku or not, to me how the message trancends physicality is key' So then what is the value of a syllable if it distorts the flow of the, 'message' is not right word 'story' I think suits. As is the story here more congerous with the soul of human understanding than demarcation.' also there is flexibility even in English strict haiku interpertation it is either 575 or 577 syll count.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/7/2016 4:51:00 PM
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Hey, my friend, just here to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/4/2016 2:47:00 PM
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oh my, you are so clever, Kashinath!! Please keep coming back here, my friend and posting haiku such as this.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/2/2016 1:54:00 PM
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So nice to read a haiku from you kash..Fantastic.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/2/2016 1:52:00 PM
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Oh MY! That's quite a haiku, Kash. Sensual, indeed. Good to see you posting again.
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