Tip Toe

Tip Toe On a tightrope Across the Universe Catch a falling star with your heart Follow the silvery light to the moon Slide down to earth on a rainbow Row your boat to the shore The music calls You home Your Perfect Poem Pick Contest- 1st place

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Harry Horsman

Date: 8/1/2021 11:25:00 PM

Taking in your first post, Jeanne, love it.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/4/2021 8:23:00 PM

That's awesome Harry...haven't read that in ages.

Silent One

Date: 7/20/2019 6:07:00 AM

A great first post and one that did well in the contest..

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/5/2019 8:09:00 AM

A joyous read Jeanne! Well done, a winning most poem, congratulations. xomo

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 6/29/2019 5:38:00 PM

Not repeating line 1 in line 9 moves it past the rigid form.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/30/2019 1:12:00 AM

Sometimes you just gotta break the form.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/28/2019 7:52:00 PM

My imagination was thrilled to tiptoe through the whimsied beauty of your poem with you, Jeanne. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/30/2019 1:14:00 AM

Thanks Susan. I have a bit of fun in my fantasy world ..glad you enjoyed.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/26/2019 12:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win Jeanne! Very lovely! : )

Robertina B.

Date: 6/24/2019 6:48:00 AM

Such a unique style, Jeanne.. You penned a wonderful poem.. Amazing creativity!! Really enjoyed.. Have a blessed day..

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/24/2019 7:56:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words. I am glad you connected with it. And after I penned it I found a painting that fit it perfectly!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/21/2019 7:47:00 AM

Your imagination gives you such a delightful way of writing; I am delighting in your delighting of words, my friend.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/21/2019 8:55:00 AM

Caren, you have made my heart sing today with all your words of praise. My poet self is very happy. Thank you so much! Best to you my new friend. Jeanne

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/11/2019 2:18:00 AM

wonderful poem; enjoyed it very much

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/11/2019 9:50:00 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed it. thank you for letting me know. Jeanne

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/11/2019 12:48:00 AM

A favorite for me. Beautiful first write to Soup! Keep them coming Jeanne. Wow!

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/11/2019 9:50:00 AM

Thanks Caren. It's fun to let the imagination play sometimes for sure.

Faith Ellen Lam

Date: 6/10/2019 9:29:00 AM

This is a beautiful diamante. Very few use this form as poignantly as you do in this poem. Each image flows into the next with direction and movement. Well done!

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/10/2019 12:16:00 PM

Thank you Faith. Those are very kind words and I'm happy you enjoyed my poem. Jeanne

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2019 10:12:00 AM

I love this one and the imagery . A marvelous first post to Soup!

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/9/2019 10:33:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I'm looking forward to learning and growing as a poet. I have found so many wonderful poets like you already. This is a rich environment.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/8/2019 5:00:00 AM

This is a lovely poem in Rictameter form, Jeanne. You tip toe, hoping to enjoy these delightful moments without disruption! ~ Welcome to Soup....hope your stay here will be long and rewarding. ~ Warm regards // paul

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/9/2019 10:34:00 AM

Thank you Paul...this is a wonderful place, I can see. And I am so enjoying the many fine reads. Jeanne

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/7/2019 9:56:00 PM

Very pretty way to start your time at PS! Welcome!

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/7/2019 11:12:00 PM

Thank you Kim. I'm looking forward to learning and growing as a poet. Jeanne

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/5/2019 3:02:00 PM

A nice flow of ideas...Enjoyed the read...All the best Jeanne

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/6/2019 9:54:00 PM

Thanks so much Arturo.