Tiny Words

tiny words

'went to the gas station
and opened my mouth 

filled my stomach
with gasoline

lit a match and 
swallowed it in

burned myself
smoked with fire

i spread like charcoal 
smeared in a kid's hand

stenched and charred black
i spread to the pristine clouds

deploring the blue vault
like a black shiitake flower

suffocating lungs
with a dire myth

then went to the ocean
and devoted myself 

to no resistance
and drowned .......

'cut my lips with sharp
visceral shale and waited

for the sharks to gnaw
my weightless lips and

useless mouth ..........
while the rest of me

traveled in the bellies
of fish ..............

......................

.......................

.......................

fed by tiny words .

........................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/23/2012 11:12:00 AM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 1/11/2012 1:34:00 PM
Wow. this is such a unique read for me-- I really enjoyed your thoughts you put in here, ernest! and the last line, really got to me, tiny words with impact indeed! Congrats!
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Date: 1/11/2012 9:18:00 AM
Ernest, a beautiful poem friend, "Congratulations" on a worthy poem honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/11/2012 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in the Poetrysoup International Contest for August 2011 Ernest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2012 2:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win x
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Date: 1/10/2012 9:07:00 PM
This is really cool. I loved reading it. Congratulations on your honored win!
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Date: 1/4/2012 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Ernest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2011 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poem this week Ernest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2011 4:39:00 PM
What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Ernest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2011 10:55:00 AM
...tiny words could have spoken, if only a tiny chance was given! I feel you in this wonderfully crafted poem, Ernest! Welcome to the Soupers' World! I am looking forward to hearing more of your words--tiny or huge!
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:43:00 PM
Creative and interesting expressions, earnest
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Date: 7/8/2011 6:01:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share words of creative poetry as this gem with luv..
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Date: 7/8/2011 4:14:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ernest. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. I must say this poem was very different. Love and blessing always, Carol
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