Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

Tiny White Pearls

Out in the freezing rain
Hesitates gray morning 
Between winter's end and
Spring's early intentions.

Leafless barren trees
Lining up on my street
Glitter sluggishly
Tiny frozen droplets
Hanging from twigs and stems 
Resembling white gems.

Until young golden rays
Reflect in puddles,
Exposing to my view
Growth of green buds
Emerging from nodes
Where moments before
I saw tiny white pearls.

March 1, 2019
Placed first: March 2019 week 1 contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree November 16, 2020 at 2:35 PM A wonderful poem, Vijay. I'm already looking forward to Spring ;)

Edward Ibeh June 30, 2019 at 7:11 AM Wonderful poem, Vijay:-) Congratulations on a fine win!

Brenda Chiri June 29, 2019 at 8:11 PM Wow VIJay this was so visual took me right to the place! Congrats on your placement my dear !;)

John Hamilton June 29, 2019 at 7:52 PM Wonderful write Vijay, enjoyed so much, congrats on a fine win!

Pandita Sietesantos May 29, 2019 at 9:18 AM Congratulations! Such a beauty reflecting awesome Mother Nature as she transitions from Winter to Spring - simply awesome! A fav for sure! Hugs. Pandita

Darlene De Beaulieu March 29, 2019 at 2:06 PM Hello Vijiay Pandit, this is a lovely tribute for Spring. Hsve a nice day my friend. Vijay Pandit March 30, 2019 at 4:21 PM Thank you Darlene.

Heidi Sands March 27, 2019 at 9:44 AM Congratulations for climbing the new best poem list :) Vijay Pandit March 30, 2019 at 4:21 PM Thank you Heidi.

Judy Ball March 14, 2019 at 12:20 PM Beautifully expressed my friend. Wonderful imagery/ I could see the leafless branches covered with ice crystals. That's the way they are in my yard right now. Great job. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit March 26, 2019 at 9:19 AM Amazing how lovely they look on trees..thank you Judy..much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney March 10, 2019 at 1:06 PM Oh Vijay: I love this...so well expressed and similar in theme to my latest post. Adding it to my FAV’s to enjoy again and again. Hugs, SuZ Vijay Pandit March 26, 2019 at 9:17 AM Many thanks for the FAVE SuZ..appreciate as always.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh March 9, 2019 at 4:24 AM A beautiful nature poem Like it Vijay Pandit March 9, 2019 at 3:00 PM Thank you Akham.

Jennifer Proxenos March 8, 2019 at 12:50 PM Love this poem Vijay - it is a breathtaking experience to watch winter dissolving from little white pearls or gems to tiny green buds and twigs which slowly transform from dry lonely souls to twigs with blossoms of hope. Congratulations on your win Vijay - you are a poet with a beautiful heart! Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit March 9, 2019 at 3:00 PM Thank you Jennifer..you are so very kind.

Brandy Nicole March 5, 2019 at 7:36 PM Congratulations Vijay, on this win. Your thoughts always touch the sky. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit March 6, 2019 at 5:26 PM Thank you Brandy.

Heidi Sands March 5, 2019 at 9:34 AM Congratulations for your win with this great poem Vijay. Have a nice day :) Vijay Pandit March 6, 2019 at 5:25 PM Thank you Heidi.

Connie Marcum Wong March 4, 2019 at 5:30 PM For me, rain conjures an entirely different world, a world with diamond dew drops and crystal prisms that become glorified by nature's pristine beauty. Your poem gave me that fresh feeling Vinay. This is so lovely! : ) xxoo Vijay Pandit March 6, 2019 at 5:25 PM So glad to hear..much appreciate, Connie..many thanks.

Nette Onclaud March 4, 2019 at 10:56 AM vijay, got more gems?... happy monday and huggs Vijay Pandit March 6, 2019 at 5:24 PM For sure--thanks, Nette.

Janice Canerdy March 3, 2019 at 1:27 PM This is really lovely, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit March 3, 2019 at 4:42 PM Many thanks Janice..much appreciate.

Joanna Daniel March 3, 2019 at 8:14 AM Excellent imagery, Vijay:) Vijay Pandit March 3, 2019 at 9:18 AM I'm so glad to read your remarks..much appreciate your visit Jo..many many thanks.

Heidi Sands March 3, 2019 at 7:17 AM Vijay , this is beautiful! I love how you ended it too :) Vijay Pandit March 3, 2019 at 9:18 AM So glad to read your feedback..much appreciate Heidi..many many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich March 2, 2019 at 7:34 PM how lovely this is!!! TFS, Vijay Vijay Pandit March 3, 2019 at 9:17 AM Much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks Andrea.

M. L. Kiser March 2, 2019 at 2:28 PM It's a "fav", Vijay; I love this. Vijay Pandit March 3, 2019 at 9:16 AM Delighted with your FAVE. Appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks, MLK.

Paul Callus March 2, 2019 at 2:18 PM As usual your descriptive powers come to the fore, Vijay. You most certainly have a very keen eye! Regards // paul Vijay Pandit March 2, 2019 at 2:27 PM Much appreciate the kind feedback..many thanks Paul. Regards.

Charlie Smith March 2, 2019 at 2:05 PM Spring's inevitable blessed return, can't come soon enough, well done Vijay... Vijay Pandit March 2, 2019 at 2:26 PM So true..everybody is waiting..many thanks Charlie.

Silent One March 2, 2019 at 12:09 PM Such wonderful imagery Vijay.. Lovely poem.. Vijay Pandit March 2, 2019 at 2:25 PM Thank SO..much appreciate your visit and comments.

Demetrios Trifiatis March 2, 2019 at 11:41 AM Herald of spring your poem my friend, Vijay that makes our heart bloom!. Vijay Pandit March 2, 2019 at 2:25 PM Thank you my friend..much appreciate your kind remarks.

Swetha Vangaveti March 2, 2019 at 9:48 AM "Growth of green buds Emerging from nodes Where moments before I saw tiny white pearls" Wonderful lines. Enjoyed it :) Vijay Pandit March 2, 2019 at 2:24 PM Thank you Swetha..much appreciate your visit and comments.

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