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Tiny white pearls

Out in the freezing rain Hesitates gray morning Between winter's end and Spring's early intentions. Leafless barren trees Lining up on my street Glitter sluggishly Tiny frozen droplets Hanging from twigs and stems Resembling white gems. Until young golden rays Reflect in puddles, Exposing to my view Growth of green buds Emerging from nodes Where moments before I saw tiny white pearls. March 1, 2019 Placed first: March 2019 week 1 contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 11/16/2020 2:35:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Vijay. I'm already looking forward to Spring ;)
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Date: 6/30/2019 7:11:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Vijay:-) Congratulations on a fine win!
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Date: 6/29/2019 8:11:00 PM
Wow VIJay this was so visual took me right to the place! Congrats on your placement my dear !;)
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Date: 6/29/2019 7:52:00 PM
Wonderful write Vijay, enjoyed so much, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 5/29/2019 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations! Such a beauty reflecting awesome Mother Nature as she transitions from Winter to Spring - simply awesome! A fav for sure! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 3/30/2019 12:27:00 PM
Beautiful, Vijay. Tiny white pearls, a lovely thought. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/30/2019 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Sandra.
Date: 3/29/2019 2:06:00 PM
Hello Vijiay Pandit, this is a lovely tribute for Spring. Hsve a nice day my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/30/2019 4:21:00 PM
Thank you Darlene.
Date: 3/27/2019 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations for climbing the new best poem list :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/30/2019 4:21:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 3/14/2019 12:20:00 PM
Beautifully expressed my friend. Wonderful imagery/ I could see the leafless branches covered with ice crystals. That's the way they are in my yard right now. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2019 9:19:00 AM
Amazing how lovely they look on trees..thank you Judy..much appreciate.
Date: 3/10/2019 1:06:00 PM
Oh Vijay: I love this...so well expressed and similar in theme to my latest post. Adding it to my FAV’s to enjoy again and again. Hugs, SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2019 9:17:00 AM
Many thanks for the FAVE SuZ..appreciate as always.
Date: 3/9/2019 4:24:00 AM
A beautiful nature poem Like it
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2019 3:00:00 PM
Thank you Akham.
Date: 3/8/2019 12:50:00 PM
Love this poem Vijay - it is a breathtaking experience to watch winter dissolving from little white pearls or gems to tiny green buds and twigs which slowly transform from dry lonely souls to twigs with blossoms of hope. Congratulations on your win Vijay - you are a poet with a beautiful heart! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2019 3:00:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer..you are so very kind.
Date: 3/5/2019 7:36:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay, on this win. Your thoughts always touch the sky. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:26:00 PM
Thank you Brandy.
Date: 3/5/2019 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations for your win with this great poem Vijay. Have a nice day :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 3/4/2019 5:30:00 PM
For me, rain conjures an entirely different world, a world with diamond dew drops and crystal prisms that become glorified by nature's pristine beauty. Your poem gave me that fresh feeling Vinay. This is so lovely! : ) xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:25:00 PM
So glad to hear..much appreciate, Connie..many thanks.
Date: 3/4/2019 10:56:00 AM
vijay, got more gems?... happy monday and huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:24:00 PM
For sure--thanks, Nette.
Date: 3/3/2019 1:27:00 PM
This is really lovely, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/3/2019 4:42:00 PM
Many thanks Janice..much appreciate.
Date: 3/3/2019 8:14:00 AM
Excellent imagery, Vijay:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/3/2019 9:18:00 AM
I'm so glad to read your remarks..much appreciate your visit Jo..many many thanks.
Date: 3/3/2019 7:17:00 AM
Vijay , this is beautiful! I love how you ended it too :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/3/2019 9:18:00 AM
So glad to read your feedback..much appreciate Heidi..many many thanks.
Date: 3/2/2019 7:34:00 PM
how lovely this is!!! TFS, Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/3/2019 9:17:00 AM
Much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks Andrea.
Date: 3/2/2019 2:28:00 PM
It's a "fav", Vijay; I love this.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/3/2019 9:16:00 AM
Delighted with your FAVE. Appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks, MLK.
Date: 3/2/2019 2:18:00 PM
As usual your descriptive powers come to the fore, Vijay. You most certainly have a very keen eye! Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2019 2:27:00 PM
Much appreciate the kind feedback..many thanks Paul. Regards.
Date: 3/2/2019 2:05:00 PM
Spring's inevitable blessed return, can't come soon enough, well done Vijay...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2019 2:26:00 PM
So true..everybody is waiting..many thanks Charlie.
Date: 3/2/2019 12:09:00 PM
Such wonderful imagery Vijay.. Lovely poem..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2019 2:25:00 PM
Thank SO..much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 3/2/2019 11:41:00 AM
Herald of spring your poem my friend, Vijay that makes our heart bloom!.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/2/2019 2:25:00 PM
Thank you my friend..much appreciate your kind remarks.
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