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Tiny White Pearls

Out in the freezing rain
Hesitates gray morning 
Between winter's end and
Spring's early intentions.

Leafless barren trees
Lining up on my street
Glitter sluggishly
Tiny frozen droplets
Hanging from twigs and stems 
Resembling white gems.

Until young golden rays
Reflect in puddles,
Exposing to my view
Growth of green buds
Emerging from nodes
Where moments before
I saw tiny white pearls.

March 1, 2019
Placed first: March 2019 week 1 contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree Date: 11/16/2020 2:35:00 PM A wonderful poem, Vijay. I'm already looking forward to Spring ;) Login to Reply

Edward Ibeh Date: 6/30/2019 7:11:00 AM Wonderful poem, Vijay:-) Congratulations on a fine win! Login to Reply

Brenda Chiri Date: 6/29/2019 8:11:00 PM Wow VIJay this was so visual took me right to the place! Congrats on your placement my dear !;) Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 6/29/2019 7:52:00 PM Wonderful write Vijay, enjoyed so much, congrats on a fine win! Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 5/29/2019 9:18:00 AM Congratulations! Such a beauty reflecting awesome Mother Nature as she transitions from Winter to Spring - simply awesome! A fav for sure! Hugs. Pandita Login to Reply

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 3/30/2019 12:27:00 PM Beautiful, Vijay. Tiny white pearls, a lovely thought. Congratulations! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/30/2019 4:22:00 PM Thank you Sandra.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 3/29/2019 2:06:00 PM Hello Vijiay Pandit, this is a lovely tribute for Spring. Hsve a nice day my friend. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/30/2019 4:21:00 PM Thank you Darlene.

Heidi Sands Date: 3/27/2019 9:44:00 AM Congratulations for climbing the new best poem list :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/30/2019 4:21:00 PM Thank you Heidi.

Judy Ball Date: 3/14/2019 12:20:00 PM Beautifully expressed my friend. Wonderful imagery/ I could see the leafless branches covered with ice crystals. That's the way they are in my yard right now. Great job. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/26/2019 9:19:00 AM Amazing how lovely they look on trees..thank you Judy..much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney Date: 3/10/2019 1:06:00 PM Oh Vijay: I love this...so well expressed and similar in theme to my latest post. Adding it to my FAV’s to enjoy again and again. Hugs, SuZ Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/26/2019 9:17:00 AM Many thanks for the FAVE SuZ..appreciate as always.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh Date: 3/9/2019 4:24:00 AM A beautiful nature poem Like it Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/9/2019 3:00:00 PM Thank you Akham.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 3/8/2019 12:50:00 PM Love this poem Vijay - it is a breathtaking experience to watch winter dissolving from little white pearls or gems to tiny green buds and twigs which slowly transform from dry lonely souls to twigs with blossoms of hope. Congratulations on your win Vijay - you are a poet with a beautiful heart! Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/9/2019 3:00:00 PM Thank you Jennifer..you are so very kind.

Brandy Nicole Date: 3/5/2019 7:36:00 PM Congratulations Vijay, on this win. Your thoughts always touch the sky. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/6/2019 5:26:00 PM Thank you Brandy.

Heidi Sands Date: 3/5/2019 9:34:00 AM Congratulations for your win with this great poem Vijay. Have a nice day :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/6/2019 5:25:00 PM Thank you Heidi.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/4/2019 5:30:00 PM For me, rain conjures an entirely different world, a world with diamond dew drops and crystal prisms that become glorified by nature's pristine beauty. Your poem gave me that fresh feeling Vinay. This is so lovely! : ) xxoo Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/6/2019 5:25:00 PM So glad to hear..much appreciate, Connie..many thanks.

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/4/2019 10:56:00 AM vijay, got more gems?... happy monday and huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/6/2019 5:24:00 PM For sure--thanks, Nette.

Janice Canerdy Date: 3/3/2019 1:27:00 PM This is really lovely, Vijay! Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/3/2019 4:42:00 PM Many thanks Janice..much appreciate.

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/3/2019 8:14:00 AM Excellent imagery, Vijay:) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/3/2019 9:18:00 AM I'm so glad to read your remarks..much appreciate your visit Jo..many many thanks.

Heidi Sands Date: 3/3/2019 7:17:00 AM Vijay , this is beautiful! I love how you ended it too :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/3/2019 9:18:00 AM So glad to read your feedback..much appreciate Heidi..many many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/2/2019 7:34:00 PM how lovely this is!!! TFS, Vijay Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/3/2019 9:17:00 AM Much appreciate the kind remarks..many thanks Andrea.

M. L. Kiser Date: 3/2/2019 2:28:00 PM It's a "fav", Vijay; I love this. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/3/2019 9:16:00 AM Delighted with your FAVE. Appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks, MLK.

Paul Callus Date: 3/2/2019 2:18:00 PM As usual your descriptive powers come to the fore, Vijay. You most certainly have a very keen eye! Regards // paul Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/2/2019 2:27:00 PM Much appreciate the kind feedback..many thanks Paul. Regards.

Charlie Smith Date: 3/2/2019 2:05:00 PM Spring's inevitable blessed return, can't come soon enough, well done Vijay... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/2/2019 2:26:00 PM So true..everybody is waiting..many thanks Charlie.

Silent One Date: 3/2/2019 12:09:00 PM Such wonderful imagery Vijay.. Lovely poem.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/2/2019 2:25:00 PM Thank SO..much appreciate your visit and comments.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/2/2019 11:41:00 AM Herald of spring your poem my friend, Vijay that makes our heart bloom!. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 3/2/2019 2:25:00 PM Thank you my friend..much appreciate your kind remarks.

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