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poem submitted to "Where Do Tears Go?" poetry contest, John Lawless, sponsor, 6/28/2026

Premiere Contest WinnerTINY PILGRIMS

teardrops are shape-shifters,
changing the instant
they slip free~
tiny pilgrims
already seeking
what they’ll become next.

spiders collect some of them,  
drinking them delicately,  
then spinning our sorrow  
into silver webs  
that glisten like forgiveness  
in morning light.

some harden into marbles~  
miniature worlds of color  
swirled from emotion~  
grief becoming something  
you can hold  
without breaking.

some rise as pixie dust  
soft as breath,  
bright as mischief~  
the raw material  
of small miracles.

some drift upward as moonbeams  
their heaviness forgotten,  
their ache turned silver  
as they join the quiet  
of the night sky.

some sew themselves into wings  
effervescent, glowing~  
the soft architecture  
of angels  
who know what it means  
to fall and rise again.

and the rarest tears  
vibrate together~  
a trembling chorus  
that becomes stardust,  
then dreams,  
then the gentle light  
that guides us home.
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Kauffman Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 11:46 AM
Sara, this is so lovely - a poem of consolation and possibility woven together by your magical images and creative metaphors. I love the different forms that tears can become. So beautifully creative. Congratulations on your trophy win! Sending you blessings of comfort for all of your tears.
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 4:16 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in the contest. Way to go. 👍. Sara K.
Poet Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 10:48 AM
There is such hidden beauty in tears, as you so beautifully depict in your poetry.  Congratulations on the trophy win.
Croft Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 6:09 AM
Congratulations on your win! Your poem shows so much beauty in tears that people don't realize.
George Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 9:39 PM
So imaginative.... Sara, tears altering themselves into different shapes. Of all, I like the image of tears taking the shape of 'tiny pilgrims' A beautiful poem. Congratulations on your well deserved trophy win.
George Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 9:38 PM
So imaginative.... Sara, tears altering themselves into different shapes. Of all, I like the image of tears taking the shape of 'tiny pilgrims' A beautiful poem. Congratulations on your well deserved trophy win.
Anaya Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 12:35 PM
Very creative, very refreshing, Sara...you had me at the first line...Congratulations on your tropphy win! A real treasure 🪎
Smith  Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 5:24 AM
What a wonderful way to portray tears as little pilgrims.
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