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Tiny Pieces

Ripped into tiny bits and pieces, My world coming apart at its creases. They’re swept away in a single gust, Like miniscule feathery motes of dust. Out of sight they float away, As I watch and wish and hope and pray. Gone forever those tiny bits and pieces, Bid them farewell as you release them.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/21/2010 5:36:00 PM
excellent write here my friend
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Date: 12/21/2010 5:29:00 AM
My oh my was this strong...beautiful lines Lori.
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Date: 12/20/2010 7:02:00 PM
Very nice Lori, beautiful~~
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