Tiny Blue Wings, Kitten and Butterflies

As blue felicity surrounds me from above Tiny wings play me the song of your love I never find sorrow in your sapphire beauty For your fluttery nature seems to consume me Tiny wings play me the song of your love My mighty paws reach for the fun you've begun For your fluttery nature seems to consume me A fanciful day, your merriment behooves me My mighty paws reach for the fun you've begun I never find sorrow in your sapphire beauty A fanciful day, your merriment behooves me As blue felicity surrounds me from above March 15, 2016

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Date: 3/20/2016 11:58:00 PM
Sam, CONGRATS on your awesome "Kitten & Butterfly win." Love Linda
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/21/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Linda-- very kind of you to drop in with your words of support :)
Date: 3/20/2016 10:30:00 PM
You've waxed eloquent with this contest, Sam . Love your choice of words like sapphire beauty and blue felicity. "A fanciful day, your merriment behooves me" ... To tell you the truth this contest behooved me! I couldn't do it, so I just rebelled ... lol.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/21/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thanks, Tim-- I wrestled quite a bit with these lines, more than I care to admit but I'm glad it matched Eve's muse in the end. Just happy to create the new work-- and I read yours, you def got it right my friend.. when all else fails..go for funny, everyone loves to laugh ;)
Date: 3/19/2016 10:56:00 PM
Lovely write Sam.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/20/2016 2:24:00 PM
Many thanks, James-- I appreciate the feedback and I'm glad you enjoyed the read :)
Date: 3/19/2016 9:02:00 PM
Hi Sam, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. An excellent write Sam, i did enjoy it....Vlad.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/20/2016 2:24:00 PM
Excellent to hear, Vlad-- I'm very glad you found some joy in the words my friend. I truly appreciate your kind support and feedback, thank you.
Date: 3/19/2016 4:31:00 PM
Beautifully penned Sam many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/20/2016 2:22:00 PM
Thank you, Jan-- I appreciate the warm feedback and kind comment. Enjoy your day :)
Date: 3/19/2016 4:26:00 PM
Sam ,thank you all for creating a poem for my contest! I LOVED IT : ) Hugs Eve
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/20/2016 2:20:00 PM
Thank you, Eve :) This was a fun write, I'm very happy that it connected with your vision for the contest so well. I appreciate the kind feedback and the great placement-- thanks for sponsoring the prompt, I look forward to future writings for you. Have a wonderful day!
Date: 3/15/2016 3:36:00 PM
you did a great job with your blue wings pantoum. It reads beautifully.
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Sam Jameson
Date: 3/15/2016 3:57:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea-- I appreciate your support. I'm glad the words read with some semblance of grace. I hope your day is treating you well :)
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