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What women's issues do we address? Echo, a dress Who can purify her, whom I adore? Echo, a door If art melts, rocks can love to tune a lyre. Echo - Liar What's that raining down from above? Echo, love What do you yearn to believe? Echo, leave Is there something I should learn? Echo, earn Or someone I would betray. Echo, disarray Now tell me, Echo, how I may get by her. Echo, buy her. As mine, no doubt, I will be her sweet. Echo, her feet Is there any way to calm her anger? Echo, hang her. Love do you reign over the thunder? Echo, no under
Written: January 20, 2023 You Select Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 1/22/2023 6:58:00 AM
Creative and interesting form Lasaad. You've done a great job with it! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 1/20/2023 3:38:00 PM
Interesting, especially at the end. Love do you reign over the thunder…no, under…
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Date: 1/20/2023 1:00:00 PM
A very creative with with a beautiful picture. Have a blessed day/weekend...........
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Date: 1/20/2023 9:57:00 AM
An enjoyable read Sotto… How does one get into a woman’s Heart - Echo, love her with all of yours… Belle :)
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Date: 1/20/2023 9:32:00 AM
Quite original, having each verse echoing its last part word.
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