Notes About The Poem
Second Place
Tinderbox This Or That, Vol 14 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh
 

Tinderbox

Autumn's at the mercy of unscrupulous wildfire
A tornado igniting forest walls with leaves aswirl
Flames of colors rare radiant orange sapphire
On glowing wind-borne embers storm, they twirl

October fires, dubbed the season of the witch
Destroying two hundred thousand acres in route
An unmerciful fate leaving a scarred barren ditch
Fierce arid gusty storms are furnaces in this drought

An exploding tinderbox from hades whence it came
A raging menace, water and powder could not rescind 
Cherished homes and lush land now go up in a flame
Engulfing the timbers like matches invoked by wild wind

Be warned all pyro’s, the witches of Witch Creek set on fire, 
Their smoke will fill your mouth, to tell what you’ve done prior!
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Anaya Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 7:12 PM
2ND PLACE/Tinderbox This Or That, Vol 14 Poetry Contest/ Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
George Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 1:11 AM
Back to your poem once again with Congratulations on your well deserved win !
Anaya Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 7:12 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Alex Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 8:05 PM
Theme of tinderbox beautifully brought out through this season sonnet. Congratulations!
Anaya Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 7:13 PM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Ibeh Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 3:09 PM
Excellent piece, Anaya:-) I loved your poem. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
Anaya Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 4:38 PM
I enjoyed your contest, Edward, the form, and a choice of topic is always a plus! Thank you, I am thrilled with my placement! Hope you are enjoying Veteran's Day! ;)
George Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 1:31 AM
Forest fires are so common in Summer and Autumn. A mere spark can ignite a wildfire and eat up seveal acres of forest and vegetation. Indeed 'an exploding tinder box from Hades ' Great entry Anaya... ! All the Best!
Anaya Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 6:02 PM
I like that line as well, Valsa. I felt obligated to write about the California fires! An honor to have your reading, Have a beautiful day!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 12:36 AM
I am Victor: and I love how you described the fires that irresponsible people destroy beauty.
Anaya Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 5:59 PM
Lol's I can't stop! Yes, you are, and I am very honored by your presence! Glad you enjoyed, Victor
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