Tinderbox

I flew to him as though he was a sultry flame
and I a fragile moth, in need of warm affection.
I danced around him, this man without a name.
In his eyes I saw desire from my own reflection,
smoldering in me was the beast I could not tame.

I was aware of danger. I'd been burned before,
but offered my tinderbox and opened the latch.
With one ardent kiss the fire in me began to roar.
Passion was ignited with the first strike of a match.
One last time, I firmly promised myself.  I swore.

Vows hold no guarantees. They're a simple token.
I felt the sting of my guilty conscience and cringed.
Pledges of love had been torn asunder and broken.
Condemned was I, for my wings had been singed,
and cried in lieu of words too grievous to be spoken.

I cannot deny my fate for sorrow had been earned.
I felt remorse, a scarred creature who remembers
the flaws within me, and the lesson I had learned.
Charred ashes were flying above crimson embers.
In a blazing fire, I watched as my tinderbox burned.



October 26, 2022
This or That, Vol 14 Contest
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Hawley Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 7:49 PM
If I am reading this correctly it is a story about an affair that should have never happened. Wow, that was a powerful little story. Congratulations on your top win.
Alex Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 7:58 PM
Great scenes depicted. A beautiful symbolic poem. Congratulations!
Poet Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 3:21 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Jenna. What lovely poetry you've created, with a very well-stated message.
Ibeh Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 2:35 PM
Outstanding work, Jenna:-) I'm faving this gem. Congratulations on your top win in my contest
Fowler Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 12:19 PM
Ah, the flames that ignite us, then fade away only to be retindered with another...wow-love this potent poem! Nicely done Jenna! :)
Logan Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 6:29 PM
I sincerely value your review. Thanks, Linda.
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October 27, 2022 at 2:32 AM
(In his eyes I saw desire from my own reflection) what a powerful line in your first stanza, I would’ve finished the poem on it Jenna, but hey what would I know, exquisitely written with achingly repressed imagery of one torn asunder, top entry for the contest, cheers David
Logan Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 5:24 AM
Morning, David. I agree that the line you mention would make a good final line in most poems but using it so in this one wouldn't have allowed me the necessary clarity to fulfill the contest requirements. Your fine reviews of my poetry always encourages me. I thank you for that, and for your contest wishes.
Parker Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 5:03 PM
Lucky in poetry...not so much in love. On fire, miss Jenna. ~;o)
Logan Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 11:21 PM
Fictional depiction. Thank you.
Cunningham Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 11:28 AM
Wow, brilliant writing Jenna, how often we make mistakes in our lives and vow never again, until the next time. Best of luck although I'm with Milton,you won't need it. Tom
Logan Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 12:30 PM
Welcome back, Tom. I've missed your kind comments. Thank you for this one.
Seeker Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 9:05 AM
A deep and powerful write ~ enjoyed from start to finish
Logan Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 12:29 PM
I'm happy to know you enjoyed them. Thank you, Seeker.
Hankins Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 8:22 AM
Jenna, these quintains are absolutely flawless. A tear came into my eyes as I read your words...so passionate, so poignant. I see a winner here in Edward's contest!
Logan Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 12:28 PM
Hi Milt. Your kudos hold great value to me, so thank you ever so much for your review of these lines.
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