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Tina S Fatal Attraction Collaboration With Sonny Roper

Tina’s Fatal Attraction With kid gloves Tina loved to play When hubby was working away She got a surprising fright When he came home early one night Instead of a fight Off went the lights Grabbing her lover’s clothes from the floor While hubby was unlocking their apartment door Lover boy was shoved to the window by his rump With a bump and a shove pointing out she told him to jump B-u- t w- h- y not hide you live on the thirteenth floor was his cry Don’t get superstitious on me now, jump was her reply
By: Eve Roper COLLABORATION WITH SONNY ROPER 3/29/2016 Inspired by Jan Allison's"Tina's"poem
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 6/12/2016 7:38:00 AM
I loved this write. Humorous. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/9/2016 8:28:00 AM
Hahaha. That was a good one.... Congrats for your placement in the contest, Eve!! ;-)
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Date: 4/2/2016 12:41:00 PM
Eve, you both did wonderful, poor lover, that was a long fall, 7 ~
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Date: 3/31/2016 6:32:00 PM
Fantastic Collaboration Eve... LINDA
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/31/2016 10:35:00 PM
thank you :) Hugs Eve
Date: 3/30/2016 1:45:00 PM
Eve, this is a awesome collab! well done to the both of you :)-luloo
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/31/2016 10:36:00 PM
thank you :) Hugs Eve
Date: 3/30/2016 8:29:00 AM
This is hilarious. Great funny collaboration. Peace ya'll:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/31/2016 10:36:00 PM
thank you :) Hugs Eve
Date: 3/30/2016 3:58:00 AM
ha ha ha this is hilarious Eva and Sonny so glad my silly poem has inspired Sonny to write :-) hugs Jan xx 7 and faves
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2016 2:25:00 AM
My pleasure lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/31/2016 10:37:00 PM
thank you for the inspiration, Jan :) Hugs Eve
Date: 3/29/2016 11:17:00 PM
Wow thats so funny, you too would make a good couple! You should meet up one day!!!!! :) Super hugs! and great collab!
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/31/2016 10:37:00 PM
thank you :) Hugs Eve
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