Timothy Rarely Laughed

Timothy rarely laughed but had a certain wicked grin,
not that grin when one smiles too widely:
his untrustworthy looks were very scary:
why couldn't he act like the happy Huckleberry Finn?

Unforgiving, rebellious, arrogant and insane
were the many attributions to his character;
everybody hated his attitude and colored hair:
they avoided him when he swung his cane.


He had no friends, except his mom offering spoils;
his attire was not trendy, he had a long, red beard 
which he never trimmed to look attractive to girls:
they saw his dark side and wouldn't mutter a word.

 
Children were horrified of his gaunt body, they thought
he was another Jesse Poneroy who tortured little boys
and killed girls, but fear was as compelling as doubt:
his reputation got tarnished by rumors, not actual facts.


Timothy rarely laughed but had a certain wicked grin,
until now nobody has figured out what had built inside of him:
rejection, hostility, animosity increased his acute pain,
but he defied them by wearing a hat with a turned-down brim.   



Entered in Broken Wings contest,
" Deep And Dark "
Written on 12/ 27/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 10:11 PM
ANDREW, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
Gentry Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 12:40 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest with this very deep and dark poem. You touched my soul with this one. I've read and reread. Feel unsettled each time. A 7!
A  Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 7:31 PM
Andrew, Congratulations on your Deep and Dark win. **SKAT**
Inman Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 10:43 AM
A vicious circle, rejection leads to defiance and defiance leads to greater rejection. Nice write Andrew.
Kimathi Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 7:49 AM
I wouldn't want to be in Timothy's shoes..... Well, congrats for your placement Andrew, in the Deep and Dark contest, by Broken Wings! ;-)
Lane Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 3:49 AM
Well done, Andrew. That was a titch scary.
Roper Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Andrew, a 7 an congratulations on your win!
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