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Timothy Rarely Laughed

Timothy rarely laughed but had a certain wicked grin, not that grin when one smiles too widely: his untrustworthy looks were very scary: why couldn't he act like the happy Huckleberry Finn? Unforgiving, rebellious, arrogant and insane were the many attributions to his character; everybody hated his attitude and colored hair: they avoided him when he swung his cane. He had no friends, except his mom offering spoils; his attire was not trendy, he had a long, red beard which he never trimmed to look attractive to girls: they saw his dark side and wouldn't mutter a word. Children were horrified of his gaunt body, they thought he was another Jesse Poneroy who tortured little boys and killed girls, but fear was as compelling as doubt: his reputation got tarnished by rumors, not actual facts. Timothy rarely laughed but had a certain wicked grin, until now nobody has figured out what had built inside of him: rejection, hostility, animosity increased his acute pain, but he defied them by wearing a hat with a turned-down brim. Entered in Broken Wings contest, " Deep And Dark " Written on 12/ 27/2015

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Date: 1/15/2016 10:11:00 PM
ANDREW, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/13/2016 12:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest with this very deep and dark poem. You touched my soul with this one. I've read and reread. Feel unsettled each time. A 7!
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Date: 1/8/2016 7:31:00 PM
Andrew, Congratulations on your Deep and Dark win. **SKAT**
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Date: 1/8/2016 10:43:00 AM
A vicious circle, rejection leads to defiance and defiance leads to greater rejection. Nice write Andrew.
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Date: 1/8/2016 7:49:00 AM
I wouldn't want to be in Timothy's shoes..... Well, congrats for your placement Andrew, in the Deep and Dark contest, by Broken Wings! ;-)
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Date: 1/8/2016 3:49:00 AM
Well done, Andrew. That was a titch scary.
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Date: 1/7/2016 9:38:00 PM
Andrew, a 7 an congratulations on your win!
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