Timeout

what do we need?
i believe in stress relief
clothes off, 
underneath
can't help but tangle feet
re-arrange and dangle
feet on shoulder
thighs make a right angle.
you want
 Go.
speed?
 Faster.
breath
me
sweat
you
 Faster. 
give up control
i can take controll
unpredictible?
 Go. 
like that
 Go.
grab sheets 
don't fall!
my bedframe 
versus wall
you agree 
and say
 Yes
agree to nothing
say
 Yes!
stretching 
tensing 
on the floor
exactly
what we came here for.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Sentes Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 9:15 PM
I'm tickled! Enjoyed your work, pal! Just a tip to help you get by: You will need to go to any poem of the poet(who made a comment to yours) you wish to respond to for your response to be read. Enjoy! Keep inspiring, Patrick! ;)
Farley Iv Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 5:20 PM
Thank You Glenn! Yeah I am still getting used to the site and whatnot but I'll figure it out eventually haha. Again thank you, Appreciate it!
O'Leary Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 12:45 PM
Hmmm... where was the 'timeout'? Good poem... Terry
Farley Iv Avatar
June 23, 2012 at 12:51 PM
By that I meant taking time out of your day to head to the bedroom, but thank you!! much appreciated!
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