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written for the 8 words contest sponsored by Joseph May

Timeless Twilight

The jade moon no longer illustrates~
  poetry that illuminates synthetic flowers,
and the timeless trinkets of twilight,
refuse to rhyme halcyon hymns in twinkling hues.

Tonight, I sit in crippling confusion,
drawing fireflies across the onyx sky;
  suspended in painted illusion,
  searching for swirling pink diamonds.

Yet from the saffron silence of sakura in blossom,
  I find crystalline colors of butterfly bliss, 
though I’ve long been awaiting rosemary rain,
to emanate a balmy muse amidst inked pain.

Now this rustic heart aches to be,
within the amorous arms of amethyst dusk, 
there I’ll rise to the music of lotus love, 
be anything but a caged weaver of faded stars. 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 6:22 AM
Lovely penning Dear Inky. "I’ll rise to the music of lotus love, be anything but a caged weaver of faded stars." Yes. Anything but caged. Big congratulations on your POTD. Sorry I'm late.
George Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 11:04 PM
Back to your poem with Congratulations on your well deserved top win, dear Empress.
M  Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 1:53 PM
Congratulations Sweet Ink…POTD and two days later a POTD dedicated to you!! Its your time to shine sweet girl!! Your popularity is evident….you are definitely a favourite on P.S for so many! You deserve all the accolades that come your way my friend!! Debx
Empress Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:47 PM
Awwn you are so kind sweet debx, truly, i never thought of popularity on soup and it humbles me to know theres some that appreciate my writing! You are truly a poetic gem! Sending you light always
Goldsmith Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:38 AM
Back with Congratulations on your NEW win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Timeless Twilight" write again. Love It...   Have a blessed weekend with your win.......................
Empress Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:15 AM
Thank you so much sweet paula
mysore Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:36 AM
It is a bliss to read you dear poet. Congratulations. Happy writing.
Empress Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:29 AM
Awwn so kind of you thank you so much dear poet
May Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 5:08 AM
Very nicely done, Congrats on your win
Empress Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:49 AM
Thank you so much dear joseph, always love your contest ideas and im grateful to be placed
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 12:02 AM
An amazing use of the right words, Ink. Big congrats on a well deserved POTD. Hope I got that right about it being POTD. I love a poem like this where you limit yourself to short stanzas.
Empress Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:51 AM
Awwn thank you soul aunt! Always grateful for your kindness and support. I try being … simple sometimes haha
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 11:59 PM
An amazing use of the right words, Ink. Big congrats on a well deserved POTD
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 1:26 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d.,Ink :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:51 AM
Thank you dear anne lise grateful for your support
Gentile Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 4:29 AM
My heart beats in butterfly bliss when contemplating your luminous lines Ink Empress! Your talent is undeniable! Congratulations!!!
Empress Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:53 AM
Thats a massive compliment coming from a talented poet like you, thank you so much
Daniel Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 3:16 AM
This is simply awesome, IE, congratulations on POTD:)
Empress Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:58 AM
Thank you so very much
Buehler Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 10:55 PM
Your poem is exquisitely lovely, Ink. Congratulations on POTD honors. My very best wishes, Evelyn :)
Empress Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 1:22 AM
Thank you so very much dear evelyn grateful
George Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 8:24 PM
"Yet from the saffron silence of sakura in blossom, I find crystalline colors of butterfly bliss, though I’ve long been awaiting rosemary rain, to emanate a balmy muse amidst inked pain." You have done it and done it masterfully. I don't remember to have read a mediocre poem of you. Always you stay above the mark. I have been away for two days and will be away on another couple of days. So I missed seeing your POTD. Great poem which I am sure will be a contest winner. Hearty Congratulations on your well deserved honor, dear Empress!
Empress Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 1:21 AM
Awwn always so good to hear from you and you are so generous and thoughtful thank you sweet valsa truly
Rodrigues Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 7:35 PM
Yet from the saffron silence of sakura in blossom… and the timeless trinkets of twilight…Congrats on POTD!
Empress Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 1:21 AM
Thank you so very much dear kim, i appreciate your kindness always
Liguori Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 7:25 PM
Congratulations on POTD!!! I enjoyed reading your poem. So lovely.
Empress Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 1:20 AM
thank you dear robert so kind of you. I appreciate you reading and commenting truly
Nicole Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 6:56 PM
You belong floating on a night such as this, while ' crystalline colors of butterfly bliss ' caress the sky. Your thoughts are tender, beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Ink Empress, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Empress Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 1:20 AM
Awn thank you so very much for this lovely comment , im grateful for your kindness truly always
Toney Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 6:21 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on Poem of the Day!
Empress Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 1:13 AM
Thank you so very much truly
One Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 1:47 PM
Congrats on your POTD
Empress Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 1:59 PM
Thank you, I appreciate your comment
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 12:29 PM
Congratulations, Dear Empress, on your POTD honour. Enjoyed the stunning images with great alliteration! Impeccable poetic artistry, My Dear Poetess!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 28, 2024 at 6:26 AM
Hi Empress, Thank you so much! I am sad to hear what’s happening with the comments of that particular poem! Actually, same thing is happening to me too, if I myself try to open. Love and blessings ~ Mala
Empress Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 9:18 PM
Dear mala i tried commenting on your poem few times but soup keeps crashing when i press enter. Just want you to know, I loved your poem for nursery rhymes
Empress Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 12:52 PM
Dear mala, thank you so much kind soul for your comment and congratulations. I am always grateful to hear from you
Anaya Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 11:24 AM
If anyone it's you Empress, who can use prompted words so beautifully. Congratulations on your POTD Ink Empress! well-deserved xhugs
Empress Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 12:53 PM
Awn thank you sweet anaya. So kind of you to say that. I appreciate your support always
Kaufman Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 11:17 AM
Dear Po E TESS. You never cease to impress me with your gifts. Congratulations on this wonderful penning, so full of alliteration, imagery and pain. You are certainly not a "caged weaver", at least not of words. Blessings!
Empress Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 12:54 PM
Thank you so much dear nancy. I appreciate your visit and words truly always
Hind Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 10:15 AM
I am so happy you got POTD! It's well deserved. Congrats, Ink <3
Empress Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 12:55 PM
I feel your happiness always, thank you swert paige, for being so kind
Kauffman Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 10:09 AM
Dearest Inky! Congratulations on your POTD. Your ability to create imagery that puts me right in the middle of the "sakura in blossom" with you is stunning. "Swirling pink diamonds," " rustic heart," "painted illusion." You have used each one of the required words to the fullest extent of poetic artistry. Just beautiful, dear friend. I am so happy for you! Sending you blessings of "butterfly bliss" and joy! ~Samzy~
Empress Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 12:55 PM
Deat samszy, always so good to hear from you and read your generous and kind words. Thank you so much truly
Greenhough Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 9:13 AM
Congratulations on POTD. I wish you well with the contest.
Empress Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 12:56 PM
Awn thank you dear hilda. Appreciate your well wishes and congratulations
Goldsmith Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 8:36 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Timeless Twilight" write again. Have a wonderful day with your win.....................
Empress Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 12:56 PM
Thank you so very much dear paula. Grateful for your kindness and support
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