Time Will Tell

Why did our fathers’ fence fell
And the fortunes of our motherland thrown into the well?
-Like a veteran midwife with the history of abortions
 We have failed to hatch the golden eggs of our pride and passions.

Why did our laws turn flaws
And charlatans made our charters grow claws?
-Like the bright beam of utopia before reality
Light have failed to go beyond the dark cobweb of our fantasy

Why did our lands turn islands
And the gloomy cloud shielded the truth of reality from our minds?
-Like a plagiarized poem before a forensic expert
Our political spies cannot fathom the faulty tone in our country’s concert.

Why did our sages’ pages fade?
And our green garden grows too thick for the saintly spade?
-Like the termite that is sentenced to die in sawmill
Corruption has glued itself to our land and blown up our bill.

Time! I say time will tell,
One day the snail will not be shielded by its shell
-Like the shadow behind the man that leaves his shelter ,
The belittled bush meat will hunt and catch the hunter.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/5/2009 12:41:00 PM
beautifully phrased... i couldn't have done it better. congratulations on your qualifications!!! GOD bless you.
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Date: 9/27/2009 12:09:00 PM
we are lizards. you have eventually succeeded in turning open our sore bellies. wonderful imagery, symbol and other literary attributes... a real outflow of a pained heart. merci beacoup.
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Date: 9/26/2009 10:35:00 AM
Adeleke, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/26/2009 3:40:00 AM
Excellent piece, congrats 2u on this one making it through to the final round, bravo!
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Date: 9/25/2009 11:09:00 PM
Congrates on your wonderful poem going through to the finals ... Love Jayne
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Date: 9/25/2009 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/25/2009 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your first round entry ! This is awesome poetry ! james
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Date: 9/25/2009 5:56:00 AM
probably but in doing so the "bush meat" will become the victomizer. Congrad's on your well deserved win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/24/2009 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations, Adeleke, on making it through the first rounds!! Good luck to you in the contest!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:55:00 PM
Adeleke, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:26:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Adeleke.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:09:00 AM
Well done, Adeleke best wishes in the next rounds.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/29/2009 10:48:00 PM
Wonderful poem...Congratulations on being featured... Dima
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Date: 8/28/2009 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Adeleke>>James
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Date: 8/25/2009 3:32:00 PM
This is a deeply powerful piece! I think the answer to all those questions is that sin entered the world. Despair and destruction was bound to happen. We just have to remember that the Light is still there. Anyway, congratulations on you feature!
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Date: 8/25/2009 2:07:00 AM
Sounds like much thought went into this featured poem. I like each line that you emphasized by the dash. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/24/2009 3:26:00 PM
What a wonderful poem to be featured this week! Great work! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/24/2009 2:37:00 PM
Nice job! Very vivid and absorbing...excellent, ruthless pace.
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:39:00 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/24/2009 3:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Adeleke. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 2:01:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:10:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Adeleke.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/26/2009 6:36:00 PM
A nice horde of analogies and comparisons, all of them cleverly done and written down; the world is truly falling into the pot, and the pot is a machine of rusty corn and masks; yep, only time will tell, as you said, we should wait and evolve thanks for sharing wiii C=
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