Time Will Pass

would you pass me by? when I am lost and alone would you walk away? like I never meant the world time will pass, we don’t have to...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 4:06 PM
I really like what you are saying with this one, Wilma. Great tanka! LUv, Andrea
Falotico Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 5:41 AM
Great Tanka!!!! and a sure winnner ...love your heart is open wide in this Gem...Loe always Michael
K. Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 3:04 PM
thank you! glad to know that it was worth losing sleep over? hugs :)
Locksley Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 12:12 PM
Time will always pass, but I hope those you lover never pass you by when you need their help, Wilma. Good luck in the pass contest! Diane
Roberts Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 12:10 PM
beautiful, if for the contest good luck Wilma
K. Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 12:00 PM
oh I definitely liked your take on the challenge, Wilma! such gripping thoughts you have here-- nikko :)
Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 11:48 AM
Only a fool and an imbicile would walk past you Wilma >> James :)
Devonshire Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 11:43 AM
No, I surely would not pass by you. Your message in this tanka is the same as mine in my entry for the "pass" contest. We're thinking alike again, Wilma. Love, Carolyn
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