Time Warp

The scars left by those yesterdays Leave her trapped in the past With a never ending pain As melancholy shadows are cast Her heart finds it hard to dance To the beat of love Memories leave her in confusion As she searches for elusive answers from skies above She seeks freedom from her illusions But she is trapped in a time warp where yesterdays always return and her tears never see to learn 2-11-2024

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/12/2024 9:25:00 AM

There are many heart-breaking emotions in this poem. Enjoyed it.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/12/2024 5:38:00 AM

Some circumstances are out of a person's control and not unless someone walks through it can they understand the trap. Many people have this happen and either share what they are going through or not. Well written :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/11/2024 7:12:00 PM

' Scars' leave many ' trapped in the past. ' It's difficult moving forward when the hurt remains. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Hugs, Brandy

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/11/2024 6:58:00 PM

Interesting poem. It has a sci-fi quality that makes me wonder if our solar system is in a time warp.. I hope not. Thank you for this poem.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/11/2024 3:13:00 PM

a poignant and emotive write, Joseph. I can understand how a person can get trapped in their own time warp where yesterdays repeat themselves...it's as if they don't learn or attract the same things over and over again. Sad indeed. Well done!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2024 9:41:00 AM

This is one I could relate to if I were a very emotional person. Well done with this poetry.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/11/2024 6:10:00 AM

So reflective of life, Joseph--your poem speaks to times bygone, yet still alive and haunting: --The scars left by those yesterdays Leave her trapped in the past With a never ending pain--aptly emotive!

Maria Williams

Date: 2/11/2024 5:30:00 AM

Very poignant write Joseph. Yes it seems many get trapped in that time warp and don't know how to get our. I feel the sentiment you have expressed in your very emotive poem. Maria PS A Fave for me.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/11/2024 5:10:00 AM

This is a very heartfelt and meaningful poem, dear Joseph. Sometimes, wounds bleed over time intervals and our souls orbit in the same painful loop.. I can feel the emotions that you've so intricately carved here, with wonderful wordplay, especially "Her heart finds it hard to dance To the beat of love", "As she searches for elusive answers from skies above" Sigh.. finally, we need learn how to make peace with those unanswered questions, for the sake of one's own serenity.. Beautifully written.