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each step floats above the earth as time stops
                          to give us hope

                                gravity   
                              seeks to
                                crush


06/08/18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/7/2022 8:27:00 PM
Congrats on ya win!:) loved it!
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 2/8/2022 3:14:00 AM
Thank you Brenda!
Date: 12/1/2020 4:28:00 PM
...suffocating at times. Hello Jim. A timeless write.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 12/1/2020 4:41:00 PM
Thx Flo, best wishes this holiday season to you and yours!
Date: 10/31/2018 9:39:00 AM
Hi James, this is a most interesting and creative write from your pen. I marvel at the thoughts I have read here on the Soup, each is excellent in its thought. This creation stands up with the best James. Have a wonderful wednesday. Your friend....Mike.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 10/31/2018 1:58:00 PM
Thanks Mike!
Date: 10/7/2018 4:07:00 AM
Fortunately dreams are free from gravity, James! There are moments when our mind soars above all! Regards // paul
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 10/7/2018 11:01:00 AM
Great take, Paul! thanks for stopping by my long time friend!
Date: 8/31/2018 1:57:00 AM
I didn't know you teach physics... nice lesson...
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 8/31/2018 10:40:00 AM
Thanks Pashang!
Date: 7/23/2018 11:32:00 AM
Such a creative, thought-provoking poem, Marshall. Much depth of thought/simplicity of expression. Excellente poetry. May love light your path in life always.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/23/2018 1:34:00 PM
Thanks Freddie...human potential is limitless, if we can rise above
Date: 7/15/2018 3:17:00 PM
Thought-provoking!
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/15/2018 3:53:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by, Jasmine!
Date: 7/2/2018 10:48:00 AM
For sure, James! Each lofty step a helium of balance toward higher understand and true immortality. Excellent write!
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/15/2018 3:51:00 PM
Thanks Joe, I agree!
Date: 6/29/2018 1:34:00 PM
Awesome thoughts
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/15/2018 3:51:00 PM
Thank you, Shreastha!
Date: 6/28/2018 10:27:00 PM
Does one have to utilize a time machine for that matter? ;) Nice write, James.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 6/28/2018 11:18:00 PM
Not at the present time...thx Moon!
Date: 6/26/2018 2:57:00 PM
astral flight so buoyant, jimbo... einstein would agree!... so impressive!..huggs
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Date: 6/26/2018 9:33:00 AM
wonderful contribution as always Brother Goff. shalom shalom to the World
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 6/26/2018 10:44:00 AM
Shalom to you Brother Anil....going out the door, will stop by your creative genius later!
Date: 6/15/2018 7:01:00 AM
I for one am glad that we can time travel. How boring it would be to always live on earth when the celestial realm is so much more exciting. Thank you for stopping by and gracing my page with your beautiful heart. Have a blessed day , Always, Pixie
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 6/15/2018 7:12:00 AM
Agreed, Pixie...dreamtime is my vehicle...jim
Date: 6/9/2018 6:59:00 PM
Ah yes! That old gravity--even pushed the hair from my head to the insides of my nose and ears where it is hardly needed in such tangled abundance:) Well said. You captured, in so few words, that moment in time where one truly feels loftily suspended---victoriously immortal! Another great write, James!
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 6/9/2018 7:07:00 PM
Crackin' me up, Joe! great comment! jim
Date: 6/9/2018 9:24:00 AM
Would you Travel forward or back?? Thanks for your visit Jim. Have a great weekend.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 6/9/2018 7:29:00 PM
Back, Richard, I desperately miss loved ones in Heaven...makes me tear-up jus' thinkin' 'bout it...
Date: 6/9/2018 12:39:00 AM
Now in few words you sure give us food for thought! :)
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 6/9/2018 7:31:00 PM
Good to see you Arthur! The man of constant sorrow....I don't believe it! So magical outside this time of year! God Bless You, Arthur
Date: 6/8/2018 1:40:00 PM
jimbo, love this soaring verse.. fly higher!..huggs
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 6/8/2018 3:32:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette!
Date: 6/8/2018 10:20:00 AM
Excellent James...very wise
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 6/8/2018 3:31:00 PM
Nice to see you, Tim! Thanks!
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