Time to plan our legacy

Time is of the essence
as we grow older we soon discover

We re-examine what's important
learn to value every moment

We choose what dreams are non-negotiable
& leave precious memories behind to loved ones 



AP: Honorable Mention 2026, Honorable Mention 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 7:12 PM
This is why we need poets, artists, and musicians, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 7:58 PM
Absolutely, Caren!
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 3:02 PM
this is most profound. Another fave. the placement of the word behind at the end is so good.
Gauthier Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 5:31 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Warrior Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 6:46 PM
Your legacy will win the race, Line...great senryu...love & light...^WW^
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 8:24 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, WW.
Faulkner Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 1:24 PM
What do we leave behind, this gives me pause, so thought provoking!
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 6:28 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Michelle.
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