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Time To Make a Change

Winter gusts subside, Pleasant sunlight pours inside, Welcome after cold. Snow and ice grow old. This peek must be a promise. Don't be a "Doubting Thomas". Ice and snow must end. Bitter winter we rescind! Traded for warm light. Sun a timely sight. Nature's plan unfolds before Spring can open doors.

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Date: 3/14/2011 1:07:00 PM
I like reading this out loud and bobbing my head form left to right with a silly grin. Is that weird? I blame you:) Well done haha, that was a pleasure
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Date: 3/11/2011 8:14:00 AM
Congrats Ray on your well deserved win!--kashinath
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Date: 3/10/2011 3:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 3/10/2011 12:17:00 PM
Lovely Haiku sequence, Ray. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 3/10/2011 10:29:00 AM
Such a pleasure to see you Ray near the top with this worthy third place beauty. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/10/2011 9:30:00 AM
If you live in a place where winters are harsh, spring is a time to rejoice. You expressed your images so well in your haiku series, Ray. Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/10/2011 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest Ray. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/10/2011 4:40:00 AM
fanstastic visuals of the wonder of nature, ray... big cheers for the great win!:) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/9/2011 8:10:00 PM
Congrats Ray on your win..I enjoyed your trip to spring. BG
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:10:00 PM
very well done Ray and congrats on a well deserved win
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Date: 3/9/2011 4:11:00 PM
She will arrive more or less on time. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:31:00 PM
Congrats Ray on your super cool win my friend in Carol's contest with this expressive entry luv.. enjoy your chart topping poem and win with luv.. hope all is well ...partner...
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Carol, Ray
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Date: 3/9/2011 2:08:00 PM
I LIKE this. Yes, it's what many of us look forward to this time of year. Way to go on your win, Ray. LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/2/2011 3:19:00 PM
Nice description of the transition from winter to soring, Ray
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Date: 3/1/2011 11:46:00 PM
I see many doing poems based on spring vs winter. LOVE that theme. You did very well with this challenge. Luv, Andrea
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