Ray Dillard Poet Haiku

Time To Make a Change

Winter gusts subside,
Pleasant sunlight pours inside,
Welcome after cold.

Snow and ice grow old.
This peek must be a promise.
Don't be a "Doubting Thomas".

Ice and snow must end.
Bitter winter we rescind!
Traded for warm light.

Sun a timely sight.
Nature's plan unfolds before
Spring can open doors.

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Samir Georges March 14, 2011 at 1:07 PM I like reading this out loud and bobbing my head form left to right with a silly grin. Is that weird? I blame you:) Well done haha, that was a pleasure

Kash Poet March 11, 2011 at 8:14 AM Congrats Ray on your well deserved win!--kashinath

Sara Kendrick March 10, 2011 at 3:58 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Elaine George March 10, 2011 at 12:17 PM Lovely Haiku sequence, Ray. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

John Freeman March 10, 2011 at 10:29 AM Such a pleasure to see you Ray near the top with this worthy third place beauty. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire March 10, 2011 at 9:30 AM If you live in a place where winters are harsh, spring is a time to rejoice. You expressed your images so well in your haiku series, Ray. Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown March 10, 2011 at 6:19 AM Congratulations on the win in my contest Ray. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud March 10, 2011 at 4:40 AM fanstastic visuals of the wonder of nature, ray... big cheers for the great win!:) huggs, nette

Barbara Gorelick March 9, 2011 at 8:10 PM Congrats Ray on your win..I enjoyed your trip to spring. BG

Robert A. Dufresne March 9, 2011 at 5:10 PM very well done Ray and congrats on a well deserved win

Joyce Johnson March 9, 2011 at 4:11 PM She will arrive more or less on time. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 9, 2011 at 2:31 PM Congrats Ray on your super cool win my friend in Carol's contest with this expressive entry luv.. enjoy your chart topping poem and win with luv.. hope all is well ...partner...

Dr.Ram Mehta March 9, 2011 at 2:23 PM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Carol, Ray

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2011 at 2:08 PM I LIKE this. Yes, it's what many of us look forward to this time of year. Way to go on your win, Ray. LUv, andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta March 2, 2011 at 3:19 PM Nice description of the transition from winter to soring, Ray

Andrea Dietrich March 1, 2011 at 11:46 PM I see many doing poems based on spring vs winter. LOVE that theme. You did very well with this challenge. Luv, Andrea