Time To Hit the Sack

winters foliage
blankets trees and grassy knolls
hibernation time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Spence Sr Avatar
October 19, 2008 at 10:59 AM
I can see the imagery clearly. Stay warm between the sheets and don't let the bedbugs bite. Having a relaxing sleep is so refreshing. Sleep well darling. Great job! ~Joseph
George   Avatar
October 6, 2008 at 2:37 PM
Very clever, dear katherine. You are so good at this form. I struggle with it. Lainie
Degenhardt Avatar
October 6, 2008 at 10:42 AM
This is gentle yet reveals the harshness of the oncoming winter and the needs of many animals. Very well written. Michael
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October 5, 2008 at 12:16 PM
Nice use of imagery in this one. You are good at these short forms. I like the opening line. I enjoyed this haiku. Karen
Kelly Avatar
October 5, 2008 at 11:45 AM
Clever piece , Katherine , in 5-7-5 flow....
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