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Time To Hit the Sack

winters foliage blankets trees and grassy knolls hibernation time

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/19/2008 10:59:00 AM

I can see the imagery clearly. Stay warm between the sheets and don't let the bedbugs bite. Having a relaxing sleep is so refreshing. Sleep well darling. Great job! ~Joseph

Elaine George

Date: 10/6/2008 2:37:00 PM

Very clever, dear katherine. You are so good at this form. I struggle with it. Lainie

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 10/6/2008 10:42:00 AM

This is gentle yet reveals the harshness of the oncoming winter and the needs of many animals. Very well written. Michael

Date: 10/5/2008 12:16:00 PM

Nice use of imagery in this one. You are good at these short forms. I like the opening line. I enjoyed this haiku. Karen

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/5/2008 11:45:00 AM

Clever piece , Katherine , in 5-7-5 flow....