Time To Choose

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just drifting along repeating my life's mistakes refrains in a song endless lyrics of heartbreaks memories of what went wrong mind singing the blues sad emotions, falling tears noticing the clues admitting the end is near deciding which life to choose notes leaving the head music vacating all thought releasing the dread that was pent up in my heart new refrain, "at last it's dead."

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White Sage

Date: 3/15/2016 6:37:00 AM

yeah, at last it's dead; i hope it isn't an horror movie though, else you see it coming to your door again lol...nice tankas Lin, superb

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2016 7:03:00 AM

There will be NO sequel to that movie...I assure you. Thanks for playing catch up with reading my writes.

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2016 5:25:00 PM

Very well said, a relate-able write. hugsx

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2016 7:02:00 AM

Thanks so very much, Cas.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/9/2016 9:53:00 PM

My pleasure, do visit when time permits.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/15/2016 7:02:00 AM

I have and will continue to visit you, Rick.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/9/2016 7:00:00 PM

I'm glad it's fiction Lin. You wrote it believably which tells me you have known your share of heartache.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/9/2016 8:08:00 PM

You're right, Rick. I've felt that pain. Thanks for reading.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/9/2016 4:01:00 PM

I was wondering if this was for the lament contest? It is quite beautiful with tender poignancy.#7

Lin Lane
Date: 3/9/2016 4:17:00 PM

I didn't write it for a contest, but thank you for liking it so well, Connie. You're very generous.