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time stands still

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"time stands still"

watching the warm fire
mesmerized by illumination
flames of reds yellows whites
within this picturesqueness
time stands still

not wanting to leave
dancing embers captivate
snuggled with love
and romanticisms
a hallmark stage breathes

quiet thoughts are clear
embracing such ornaments
that touch eyes and souls
harbored forevermore
still time stands still

SkyWatcher
12-05-23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 7:25 AM
In the quiet moments while time stands still, the timelessness is filled with the Love of God. Embrace them and acknowledge Him, for He loves you. A lonely poem, Lisa. Thanks for the peace it brings to us the readers. Have a blessed Christmas season, Hugs, Bill
Ricci Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 3:44 AM
Bill Bill Bill. Good Morning. It is I who thanks you. Truly. I do not take you or your visits and generosity for granted. Thank you ever so much. Have a wonderful morning and day. I will see you on your page. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
Empress Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 6:39 AM
I love the way you describe things and make your poems flow in such a creative manner, I especially love the lines “ mesmerized by illumination flames of reds yellows whites within this picturesqueness“ i can see through your words and feel the heat as i read! How clever and beautiful it is. And i love how you’ve described time too: a poem on time never is bad but this dear lisa is so evocatively impeccable. I felt so much reading your word weaving. What touches our heart,soul forever inscribed
Ricci Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 3:51 AM
Good Morning Empress. Hi. A million thank yous for your generosity. Never do I take you your visits reviews or commentary for granted. Truly. I am honored and I thank you. This was a beautiful way to start the day. Have a beautiful morning. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
Cunningham Avatar
December 5, 2023 at 6:23 AM
Before I got married I'd sit reading by the open coal fire and often I'd stop reading to just stare into the flames, so relaxing. Tom
Ricci Avatar
December 7, 2023 at 3:23 AM
Yes it is. Very. Hi Tom. Good Morning. Thank you for seeing this entry and for enhancing it with your shared commentary. The flames and all of it is very mesmerizing and relaxing I agree. Have a wonderful morning and day. Take care of yourself. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
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