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Time Stand Still Please

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Under  the canopy of trees
               Just   my love and me
Gently he holds my hand
               Draws me close to caress
Tenderly...Time stand still please

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Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/29/2010 2:15:00 AM

excellent peace duncan

Carol Fillmore

Date: 9/29/2010 10:53:00 AM

Sara, thanks so much for your comment on 'Colourful girl'!

Lynette Chachere

Date: 9/28/2010 4:12:00 PM

yur title speaks some greate words!!(: wouldn't that be nice? ~Always&Forever Lynette

Paula Lelitte

Date: 9/28/2010 4:38:00 AM

you create the whole story within the tanka and capture the emotion perfectly

Adell Foster

Date: 9/27/2010 11:28:00 AM

What a lovely write, wonderful imagery and tone, I thank you Sara for sharing the read. God Bless, Always, Adell

Jessica Bowie

Date: 9/26/2010 6:33:00 PM

sweet poem.. do u happen to have a brother named Aaron?

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/25/2010 1:52:00 PM

I would also want time to come to a halt when a scene like this takes place. Beautiful write Sara ;) love Wilma

David Smalling

Date: 9/24/2010 1:14:00 PM

Time, go get your vacation ... leave me in this awesomeness, let me inits beauty bathe.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/24/2010 5:59:00 AM

This is such a beautiful write, a beautiful scene you painted....love it .....Love Michael

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2010 5:27:00 PM

Nice Sara, enjoyed your tanka,..p.d.

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 9/23/2010 12:34:00 PM

Go Sara, Go Sara, this is a cool write girlfriend

James Rasmusson

Date: 9/23/2010 8:13:00 AM

I'm so happy you chose to read my 'ANTI...' Sara. I often say "words are the funist toys". I'll bet you have a similar attitude. ~Jim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2010 7:18:00 AM

Sara, thanks so much for your sweet remark. And this one is my favorite of the two . I can't put my finger on it. I think it's the way you ended it like you are imploring time. And also the way you indented the lines. Is it the one entered in the contest. Best of luck with it. LUv, Andrea

Carol Fillmore

Date: 9/23/2010 6:58:00 AM

beautiful tanka Sara! time stood still for a few moments after reading this -- to savour:) Thanks so much for your comments on "Coaxing the write", that was so appreciated and they touched me deeply. Thank you:)

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/22/2010 11:21:00 PM

lovely imagery, good luck in the contest

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/22/2010 4:48:00 PM

enjoyed reading today mom! Hope you get things settled and peaceful.

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/22/2010 3:43:00 PM

How comforting it is to have shared this special moment beneath the canopy of trees, Sara. Thanks for your kind words in your Soup mail.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/22/2010 3:09:00 PM

I think it is for the Sanctuary contest, Good luck, Sara

Daver Austin

Date: 9/22/2010 2:59:00 PM

Ooooowwww! So romantic. "Tenderly" describes this one. Love, Dave

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/22/2010 2:55:00 PM

If only we could make time stand still, Sara. At least you have your memories of this happy time. If this is for the sanctuary contest, I think your entry will do very well! Love, Carolyn

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