Time Stand Still Please

excellent peace duncan

Sara, thanks so much for your comment on 'Colourful girl'!

yur title speaks some greate words!!(: wouldn't that be nice? ~Always&Forever Lynette

you create the whole story within the tanka and capture the emotion perfectly

What a lovely write, wonderful imagery and tone, I thank you Sara for sharing the read. God Bless, Always, Adell

sweet poem.. do u happen to have a brother named Aaron?

I would also want time to come to a halt when a scene like this takes place. Beautiful write Sara ;) love Wilma

Time, go get your vacation ... leave me in this awesomeness, let me inits beauty bathe.

This is such a beautiful write, a beautiful scene you painted....love it .....Love Michael

Nice Sara, enjoyed your tanka,..p.d.

Go Sara, Go Sara, this is a cool write girlfriend

I'm so happy you chose to read my 'ANTI...' Sara. I often say "words are the funist toys". I'll bet you have a similar attitude. ~Jim

Sara, thanks so much for your sweet remark. And this one is my favorite of the two . I can't put my finger on it. I think it's the way you ended it like you are imploring time. And also the way you indented the lines. Is it the one entered in the contest. Best of luck with it. LUv, Andrea

beautiful tanka Sara! time stood still for a few moments after reading this -- to savour:) Thanks so much for your comments on "Coaxing the write", that was so appreciated and they touched me deeply. Thank you:)

lovely imagery, good luck in the contest

enjoyed reading today mom! Hope you get things settled and peaceful.

How comforting it is to have shared this special moment beneath the canopy of trees, Sara. Thanks for your kind words in your Soup mail.

I think it is for the Sanctuary contest, Good luck, Sara

Ooooowwww! So romantic. "Tenderly" describes this one. Love, Dave

If only we could make time stand still, Sara. At least you have your memories of this happy time. If this is for the sanctuary contest, I think your entry will do very well! Love, Carolyn