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Time Run Out

time run out his body peacefully surrendering posted on October 14, 2018

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Susan Ashley
Date: 10/14/2018 9:15:00 PM
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Wow! Powerful and poignant emotional imagery, Line. This stirs memories and has quite an impact upon my heart. Brilliant poetry.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2018 9:53:00 AM
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Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and comment, Susan.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/14/2018 5:02:00 PM
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Good image, Line. Love the word choice "surrender"
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/14/2018 6:00:00 PM
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Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Agnes.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/14/2018 12:17:00 PM
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Yes, many exhausting nights when one falls into bed, it does feel like the body is broken. But the sleep is so much deeper. Well done.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/14/2018 12:32:00 PM
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Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, ML.
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Winged Warrior
Date: 10/14/2018 11:18:00 AM
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Your body ain't broken...you are the great SenryuLine! lol...love & light...^WW^
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/14/2018 12:00:00 PM
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Thanks for your visit and concern, ^WW^. But it's not always about me. Line xx

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