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Gasping ... The year drew in Months, weeks and days, anew - Filled its lungs with the breaths of life, Hope, promise and endeavor coursed its veins, Feeding want, deed and wisdom, now ... It exhales lost shadows, Weeps and expires ... Gasping.

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John Watt

Date: 2/18/2022 10:44:00 AM

Beautifully expressed, Bard. I love the line "It exhales lost shadows". Congrats on your win ~ John

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/18/2022 10:01:00 AM

This previous Trophy winner was a top pick for me Greg. Congratulations on your win. Blessings xxoo

Meghan Hutchings

Date: 2/17/2022 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations! I was inhaling and exhaling your beautiful words as I was reading your poem! Love the metaphors and descriptions! Much love...Meghan

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/20/2020 2:03:00 PM

Hello Gregory R. Baden, this is a great poem. I enjoyed it. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/21/2020 2:34:00 PM

Hello Gregory R. Baden, I enjoyed this poem you created.You enjoy your day.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/21/2020 10:31:00 AM

Many kind thanks, my friend - I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :o) <3

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/31/2019 9:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful Trophy win Greg! Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/21/2020 10:30:00 AM

Thank you so much, Darlene, I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem - it was an enjoyable write! Blessings, My Friend! :o) <3

Charlotte Watkins

Date: 12/29/2019 11:10:00 AM

Another great win, so amazing how you craft your pieces. Exquisite

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/29/2019 11:45:00 AM

That's very kind of you to say, Charlotte, and I'm so pleased that you liked my poem. Blessings, My Friend! :o) <3

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/29/2019 1:18:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/29/2019 11:44:00 AM

It is my sincere pleasure, Beata, and thank you so very kindly for the nice comments! Bless you! :o) <3

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/28/2019 1:34:00 PM

exquisite write Greg...well worthy of the trophy...congratulations on your win :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/29/2019 11:44:00 AM

Many kind thanks, Sandra, I'm so happy you liked my poem! Blessings, Friend! :o) <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2019 12:26:00 PM

this was my very favorite of those I recall reading. A very well deserved win, Greg. Congratulations

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/29/2019 11:43:00 AM

Oh, that's very kind of you, Buddy - thank you very much! :o) <3

Jan Allison

Date: 12/28/2019 10:24:00 AM

wow Greg you certainly too the theme to heart, no wonder you have another very well deserved trophy for the cabinet, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/29/2019 11:43:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Jan, it always means so much when I get a sweet comment from you! Blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/28/2019 10:02:00 AM

You never cease to amaze me, my friend, for another masterpiece tendered by your talent, my compliments on your win and my heartfelt thanks for entertaining my contest ~ Aloha always William

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/29/2019 11:42:00 AM

Many kind thanks to you, William, for my wonderful placement! I am so pleased that you found my poem worthy of such - I wasn't quite sure where to go with it, and then decided to try a literal approach - it was fun! Blessings, my friend! :o)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2019 7:01:00 PM

so far, this is the only truly poetic one I have seen . I took it very literally, writing on an "event' That event was today and it was so much fun!!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/15/2019 3:33:00 AM

Why, thank you very much, My Dear Buddy - I'm so pleased you liked this one - wasn't sure where to go with it! Blessings! :o) <3

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 12/12/2019 10:18:00 AM

Oh, a winner in my books, gorgeously done. My best to you Greg! xomo

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/15/2019 3:32:00 AM

Thank you so much, Mo, it is greatly appreciated, my friend! :o) <3