Time Potd

The air is still, you can hear Buzzing of bees, feeding on nectar And pollen of fruit trees; we Slowly walk through with gentle ease Grateful for a small measure of shade That tease by uncomplaining trees, We stop. Sit for a wee rest upon earth breast Beneath the pavilion of overhanging limbs, Dangling leaves and fragrant blooms At that moment, time runs out as the clock Keeps ticking. Tick-tock, tick-tock, tick-tock Ceaseless beating of our longing hearts Our future naturally occurring now, Our lives are worth, but a second We see the past, present, and future The infinite and eternal nature of our soul's Bathe in a warm trance that can only belong to us 7/6/2020 Time- 8 Word Challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by: A Dear Heart
1. time 2. moment 3. clock 4. ticking 5. past 6. present 7. eternal 8. infinite
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 11:11 AM
Gorgeous imagery, Eve! Kudos on POTD. Love and more love always.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 5:49 AM
Lovely wording, dear Eve! Congratulations on POTD!
Watt Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 8:38 PM
Such elegant poetry, Eve. Wonderful musings on the classic theme of time. Well done and congratulations for the honor of POTD. Hugs ~ John
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 4:09 PM
Your poem embraces the joys of life and living Eve. It is beautifully composed. I see why it was honored with POTD! A worthy piece with divine imagery! Congratulations! I am saving this gem to my Faves my friend! Blessings xxoo
Proxenos Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 12:32 PM
Eve my friend what a beautiful poem and belated congrats on your POTD, such a worthwhile and noteworthy honor bestowed on you - kudos! Blessings, Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 4:45 AM
Belated congratulations on POTD award, Eve, for this insightful poem. Well done! Hugs // paul
Nicole Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 6:30 PM
Blessings are all around us- all we need to do is take a moment to embrace them. Your thoughts caress gently around me. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. :) Congratulations Eve, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:15 PM
Hello, Brandy, you are always a welcome joy of sunshine. Thank you for congratulation and the inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve
Kitchin Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 5:57 PM
Eve, a wonderful poem, congratulations on POTD!
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:14 PM
Thank you very much, Tania, for the congratulation . Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 2:46 PM
- Beautiful poem, Eve :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:14 PM
Thank you very much, Sunshine, for the congratulation and compliment. Hope you are doing well. Hugs Eve
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 2:44 PM
Hello Eve, congradts on your win. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 9, 2020 at 7:49 AM
Hello Eve, I am very proud of you. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. Darlene
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:13 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene, for the congratulation. Blessings my friend. Hugs Eve
Wolf Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 12:59 PM
Wonderful way to meet the challenge, Eve -- with POTD! Congrats! Cheers, Gershon
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:12 PM
Thank you very much, Gershon, for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment. Honor goes to Constance for the inspiration to write this verse. Hugs Eve
Kauffman Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 11:45 AM
Eve, congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy your honor! Thanks for saving a spot for all of us to share your timely garden. Blessings!
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:11 PM
Sam, thank you very much for the congratulation and the wonderful inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve
Goldsmith Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful write. Enjoy your win and day............
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:08 PM
Thank you very much, Paula, for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment dear friend. Hugs Eve
Wanter Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 9:54 AM
Very nice! Dream-like to me. Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:08 PM
Thank you very much, Sunlite, for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve
Gondolf Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 9:03 AM
Eve, back with a congrats on a well deserved POTD honor. Hugs, John
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:07 PM
Thank you very much, John, for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment both now and before. Honor goes to Constance for the inspiration to write this verse. Hugs Eve
Michael Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 8:43 AM
Well done...Congratulations Eve on POTD...Timelesstime
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:06 PM
Thank you very much, Arturo, for the congratulation. Hugs Eve
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 7:41 AM
Wow, a beautiful image of a precious moment shared, Eve. BIG congrats on your win and POTD!! Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:05 PM
Rhonda, thank you very much for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment. Blessings to you as well. Hugs Eve
Pandit Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 6:21 AM
Congrats Eve on poem of the day..BIG congrats as well for a TOP win in the contest.
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:04 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay, for the congratulation . Honor goes to Constance for the inspiration to write this verse. Hugs Eve
Logan Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 5:47 AM
Hello, Eve. You've written a piece of your self into this timeless poem. It's a contest winner and now potd. Congratulations.
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:04 PM
Thank you very much, Jenna, for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment. Honor goes to Constance for the inspiration to write this verse. Hugs Eve
Riabi Dziri Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 5:03 AM
Great insightful poetic lines in your wonderful poetry! Words of beauty and meaning, a reader never ceases to be amazed and enlightened.. Absolutely, we mold time to our benefit and make life worth living with honouring past, fruitful present and promising future! So much enjoyed the read! Congratulations on your POTD honour, dear Eve! and the recognition of an outshining win! Well earned! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings.
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:02 PM
Besma , you are such a breath of fresh air. Thank you very much for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment my friend. Hugs Eve
Sharp Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 3:41 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD, Eve, well deserved.
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:00 PM
Lawrence, thank you very much for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment now and then. Hugs Eve
Warrior Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 3:12 AM
Fantastic time peace Eve...now, its time for POTD!!... Congrats!! my friend...enjoy the honor...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 9:58 PM
^W^, thank you very much for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment. Yes, I have to thank Constance for the inspiration to write this verse, and yes, it isn't often it comes around. Hugs Eve
Cunningham Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 2:57 AM
Love the imagery in your verse Eve, congrats on your win and also for POTD honours. Tom
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 9:55 PM
Tom, thank you very much for the congratulation and the inspiring compliment. Hugs Eve
La France Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 4:28 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my time contest, excellent writing and a FAV for me _Constance
One Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 2:56 PM
You did the challenge very well.. o can you are sailing the seas...
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