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Time Passing

Time Passing

I can see the wrinkles in the mirror, 
even without my glasses. 
What does that mean? 
They are deep and permanent. 
Youth has fled my appearance. 
Yet, it has not left my heart. 
The fact, of reality...
can not change my soul. 

The creases next to my eyes... are from laughing. 
My mother told me not to do that, 
it would change my face forever. 
She was right, and she was wrong. 

I put my specs back on, 
having washed the sleep from my eyes. 
I can see better, 
I do not look away. 
The lines of time, they are still there, 
deeper even than before. 
That is okay, 
I find I do not care... to stare. 

I smile and remember, what is was to laugh. 
I long to do it still. 
I want to embrace my last days, 
with happy thoughts, of God, family, and friends. 
I refuse the darkness of evil dismay, 
and embrace the joy of knowing...
that this is not the end, but the beginning. 
It starts with now and continues on, 
to the place prepared. 

I take one last long look into the smooth surface of the mirror. 
It can not hold the image of my life in its reflection, 
it can only keep the moments... 
that I let it have.

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Date: 6/6/2022 8:17:00 AM
Thanks for sharing the wisdom of your life through your poetry, Ann. We are blessed to have your poems to read. The soul is eternal and never grows old. When one lives from the soul level of consciousness, life is vibrant and fulfilling. Have a blessed day, my friend. Bill
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Ann Foster
Date: 6/7/2022 3:54:00 PM
Thank you for your sweet... kind... words. God bless your days... Ann
Date: 5/13/2022 10:52:00 PM
Those reflections do seem to tell the truth, but then do we? In your poem, you do, and wisely so..Enjoyed this poem Ann.
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Ann Foster
Date: 5/21/2022 2:25:00 PM
You are very kind. Thank you... Ann
Date: 5/11/2022 12:29:00 AM
Hi Ann. Yes I know exactly where you cone from I also have written similar poetry Enjoyed your style Cheers christine
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Ann Foster
Date: 5/21/2022 2:25:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by. Thank you for your kind words... Ann
Date: 5/1/2022 6:49:00 PM
So beautifully said. Acceptance of oneself is so important. When I look into my mirror and see that old woman who won't go away I figure she must envy me my youth because I'm still young although my body doesn't know that. However I still get around like someone half my age. Good stuff here. A fave for me. God Bless, JB
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Ann Foster
Date: 5/21/2022 2:24:00 PM
I agree... Blessings for your day. Us young people need to stick together... Ann
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