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Time Out To Mourn

Excuse me while I take time out to mourn

     I can see the headlines tomorrow morn

          BRONCOS TAKE A BASHING

               COACH GIVES TEAM TONGUE LASHING

                    The outcome left Bronco boosters forlorn

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Lizzie Treetop Date: 1/17/2012 5:28:00 AM A few simple lines but one can picture it all, especially the coaches tongue lashing poor poor defeated Broncos! Hugs lizziei Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/16/2012 10:09:00 PM Bob H., how are you? i see you are into sports... if the green bay packers fail this year..i will mourn tooo... excellent poem...always..p.d. Login to Reply

Robert Johnson Date: 1/15/2012 2:26:00 PM Nice limerick Robert. I hope you saw Jimmy Falon's bit on Tim Tebow and Jesus. It was quite entertaining. Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 1/15/2012 12:01:00 AM This was tragic news for Broncos fans not only in the Colorado area, but wherever they may be right now. Perhaps the Broncos and the Eagles will meet in next year's Super Bowl. You wrote another great limerick here Bob. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 1/14/2012 10:31:00 PM Ha, ha, great write my friend! Too bad for the Bronco's! I do have to tell you, I lived in Walpole Massachusetts at one time in my life...which is right not to Foxboro Mass...where the Patriots live and breathe!! Sooooo I have to tell you, I was rooting for my team, the Patriots! But I did think that it would have been a better game than that! Sorry about that! I do hate seeing peoples teams lose. Well maybe next year, you never know!! Awesome Work!! Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 1/14/2012 10:17:00 PM There will be another day, Bob..take heart! Enjoyed the Limberick anyway. Enjoy the rest of your weekend! Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Tim B Date: 1/14/2012 10:07:00 PM If ever a time for the Lord to be sitting on the 50 yard line. If pray tell he had though, the crowd likely would have thrown peanuts at him. I surmise it was not to be because the vehicle for people to come to the Lord is an internal combustion engine. Login to Reply Tim B Date: 1/14/2012 10:08:00 PM Excellent poetry though by the way good sir! :)