Time of Our Lives

Time is either friend or foe;
Sometimes he seems to pass too slow.
To a child, impatience reigns;
We've come to call it growing pains.

Can't wait for happy holidays 
and birthday parties but, time betrays
the innocent and trusting young
who believe that spring cannot be sprung.

"There's always time to get things done",
says the young man of twenty-one.
There's years ahead and life to live
so time is only relative.

Over thirty and going strong?
The nights are short but the days are long.
Fatigue is only in your head.
You can sleep when you are dead.

The years began to fly on by.
Looking back you can't deny
that time, somewhere, picked up the pace
and life became an all out race.

Now you're near the finish line;
No hurry to last days define.
Time will leave you wanting more
but, when he runs out, he slams the door!


March 1, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/22/2019 4:18:00 PM
Nice one Janese, time indeed can be a hindrance or a help. Nice rhyme with good imagery too.
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Date: 4/21/2019 6:51:00 PM
True. Some folks latter years are a race to the end unless they learn to manage what time they have left. There is so much wisdom in those few lines, knowledge we would have appreciated young. Very philosophical and smooth reading. D. Kay
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Date: 3/3/2018 12:41:00 PM
The show's over...Nice rhythm...Nice flow...good message too...All the best Janece
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Date: 3/3/2018 12:02:00 PM
You make some valid points, your poem made me smile... well written Janece..
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Date: 3/2/2018 10:40:00 PM
Very witty, Janece. I can relate!!! Well done. Your title is absolutely perfect.
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Jan Terry
Date: 3/2/2018 11:30:00 PM
Thanks, Line. It was a fun write.
Date: 3/2/2018 9:29:00 PM
Very enjoyable reading! Well done!
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Jan Terry
Date: 3/2/2018 11:31:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. I enjoyed writing it.
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