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Time of Departure 12:29

I vaguely heard it Almost a whisper “TOD – twelve twenty nine” “but wait” I shouted “I’m still here” “DON’T…..pull that sheet up!” “Stop whispering” “I can still hear you”. “You guys are gonna be in so much trouble When I tell Mom”. “I’m never playin’ Doctor with you guys again. John G Lawless 7/12/2023

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Date: 7/12/2023 7:13:00 PM
I can just picture the scene! Fun write! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/12/2023 8:55:00 AM
Funny poetry, Tod. :-) Bill
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Date: 7/12/2023 8:40:00 AM
Sinister
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