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Time For Us To Sing

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Heidi Sands

8/18/23

POTD: 8/20/23

I came across a baby bird And I wondered of its flight A life had just begun with a rough starting plight Along came a gust of wind as if blown by the sea But it's a mountain top high For this baby bird with me It was then, our dreams were born as we both began to fly Carried by currents of faith Touching clouds in the sky The sun set upon our shoulders drying raindrops on each wing The horizon burst with colors just in time, for us to sing The melody traveled far across the valley below Reaching souls, a song is found Always closer than you know

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Robertina B.

Date: 9/28/2023 4:12:00 PM

A beautiful and timeless write, my friend.. Absolutely enjoyed this! Your talent shines Heidi! Many blessings to you..

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/29/2023 6:08:00 AM

Thank you so much Robertina :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/28/2023 2:19:00 AM

Very lovely poem! From lovely Heidi. With best wishes and hope, have a wonderful day ~AA

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2023 7:04:00 AM

Thank you very much Abdullah :)

Harveen Kaur

Date: 9/10/2023 7:00:00 PM

A wonderful poem and I enjoyed reading it. The imagery used here is quite fascinating.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2023 5:36:00 AM

I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you :)

Sand Blown

Date: 8/30/2023 10:24:00 AM

....right on me friend write on....time be .....to sing about.......stan

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/30/2023 11:34:00 AM

Thank you very much Stan :)

Marikate Kingston

Date: 8/22/2023 5:59:00 PM

What a pretty, peaceful poem. I enjoy poems that I can see as I read, Your is just that kind. I used to live by the ocean and I miss it and it's smell. One of my favorite stanza of yours reads : "The horizon bursts with colors just in time, for us to sing" I lived in Vermont for a while too, and of course your 4th stanza says it all for me. Your poem brought back nice memories. :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/22/2023 6:39:00 PM

I am happy it is peaceful for you. I appreciate your kind feedback. Thank you. I hope all is well :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/22/2023 5:42:00 AM

so lovely and uplifting Heidi. Congratulations! :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/22/2023 6:29:00 AM

Thank you Linda. It is nice to see your comment. I hope you have beautiful day :)

Mark Toney

Date: 8/21/2023 9:48:00 PM

A beautiful, uplifting poem, Heidi. A belated congratulations on Poem of the Day!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/22/2023 5:32:00 AM

Thank you Mark. I appreciate your kind visit :)

The Situation

Date: 8/21/2023 3:47:00 PM

And it really was a time to sing. This moved me.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/21/2023 4:58:00 PM

Thank you very much. I am happy to hear that and appreciate you saying so :)

Silent One

Date: 8/21/2023 10:18:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD.. Fully deserved with this wonderful poem.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/21/2023 10:40:00 AM

Thank you Silent One! I appreciate it very much :)

Michael Tor

Date: 8/20/2023 9:03:00 PM

Heidi such a wonderful poem to read. Love the imagery and theme you created, a pleasure to read. Congratulations on receiving POTD. Sorry I was late to see...

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/21/2023 6:05:00 AM

Thank you very much Michael. No worries. I appreciate your kind support. I hope you have a nice day :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/20/2023 8:37:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD. Many blessings to you, my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/21/2023 6:04:00 AM

Thank you Eve. I hope you have a nice day. Blessings :)

Arastu Goyal

Date: 8/20/2023 7:32:00 PM

Beautiful poem, with vivid imagery and a wonderful message on faith, congrats on the deserved POTD. -AG

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/21/2023 6:04:00 AM

Thank you very much :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/20/2023 5:33:00 PM

Dear Heidi, because of faith, you were able to fly. Such a wonderful reason, indeed. Your words bring a smile and lift my heart. I can feel the wing beneath my wings too, as the melody reaches beyond the clouds. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/21/2023 6:03:00 AM

Hi Brandy. I appreciate your kind feedback very much. I hope you have a beautiful day. Thank you :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/20/2023 4:07:00 PM

Such a sweet poem. Congratulations on POTD, Heidi. SuZ

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/20/2023 4:17:00 PM

Thank you Suzanne :)

John Hamilton

Date: 8/20/2023 11:49:00 AM

A beautiful journey of words, congrats Heidi on your potd.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/20/2023 12:02:00 PM

Thank you John. I appreciate your comment :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/20/2023 11:21:00 AM

Hello Heidi, a beautifully done poem. I enjoyed the read. I like the way you put the baby bird and yourself into this poem. Congratulations on the POTD Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs./Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/21/2023 4:34:00 AM

Hello Heidi, good morning. Congrats on the POTD. I am making this poem my fav. Hugs. /Darlene/

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/20/2023 12:01:00 PM

Thank you Darlene. I am happy you enjoyed this. I appreciate your support :)