TIME FOR SOME BUBBLY

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TIME FOR SOME BUBBLY
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After a day filled with rhyme,
Storm the Squirrel found time, sublime.
    In a tub full of lathering foam,
    with effervescent glass she imbibed at home.
Sipping champagne, enjoying her poetic prime!

With bubbles that danced all around,
she admired words and verses she’d found.
     “But dear sonnets and haikus,
     you’ve given me such blues,
But now with this fizz, joy abounds!”

So she toasted to muses and dreams,
to the creativity that fills her to the seams.
    With a wink and boisterous cheer,
    she declared, “Fellow poets, have no fear,
For tomorrow, I’ll conquer new themes!”

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/18/2025 8:23:00 PM

Looks as if 'Storm' has quite a high tolerance for the bubbly. lol. Cute poem, Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/19/2025 5:49:00 PM

thanks for visiting and for your witty & humorous comment about Storm. wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/18/2025 11:17:00 AM

Poetry is work...but fond labor most writers would agree. For who, with such creative soul, does not like a rhyme-challenge, or prose with poetic nose -- taking expressive sniffs. Imbibe to heart's content!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/18/2025 6:09:00 PM

I appreciate your witty and humorous comments, Joe. Thank you...enjoy the week ahead, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/18/2025 5:06:00 AM

This scene unfolds, a canvas of untainted grace. Crafted with care, it holds a truth deep and rare. Your limerick, dear Sara, is a wonder to see. A picture that danced with joy, bringing laughter to my face. This one brought me joy in its reading.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/18/2025 6:08:00 PM

Smiling here, grateful for your kind words but most grateful that my poem brought you joy. That means a great deal to me...wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2025 4:56:00 AM

Love the picture which brought laughter to my face. I enjoyed reading this one. Thank you so much for sharing. Hope this is a great Monday for you. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/18/2025 6:07:00 PM

awww, thank you, Sara K. I appreciate your visit and kind words. Grateful my poem induced some laughter. Have a blessed evening, Sara B