...Time Could Heal Everything)

standing in the center of this room
once shared between two
becomes one, sealed
behind pixels 
clasped with cottonwood

your sundress reveals 
my poem
hung across rosemary shoulders
of soft smile echoes
whispers of rain across your cheek

we walk crosswalks of brokenness
careful of ripping too much flesh
knowing at an angels moment, life is silenced

                               (a sigh from the assassins gun)

mirrors lie to the one who seeks identity
creases steal youth
from times mason jar;
                 -one last glance-
the close of a door 
cannot stop the fossilized finger 
that locks you away
eclipsed like a locket welded shut
  
(if only…

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Date: 3/18/2009 9:38:00 AM
A delicate and beautful poem. Emotive, filling me with a sense of loneliness.
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Date: 3/13/2009 7:54:00 PM
Jason, I love the sensuality in the second verse, "your sundress reveals my poem...rosemary shoulders." Awesome image. The image of aging and unattainable beauty "locks your brightness away" is incredible as well. LOVE this one! Carolyn
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Date: 3/11/2009 5:16:00 PM
wonderful if depressing (soft smile) unique imagery! great write Touch, sight, senses water, air elements..good one for the 5 senses 5 elements contest! Light & Love
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Date: 3/11/2009 12:57:00 PM
Excellent use of imagery, From the title to the context of the poem, very masterful...Raul
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Date: 3/11/2009 7:00:00 AM
This is beautiful, has such a soft tenderness that really draws you in. I love the phrasing, particularly these parts: "whispers of rain across your cheek" and "mirrors lie to the one who seeks identity" - I especially like that one, so true. The feelings come across well, and the "locket welded shut" gives it such a finality. You penned this wonderfully.
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Date: 3/11/2009 1:58:00 AM
if only...2 of the saddest words ever born from a mouth. beautiful, soft tone to this Jason, well done, love Kristin
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Date: 3/10/2009 4:59:00 PM
Brother Jason, you are the man..I want to know where can I learn to write like this? I know I sound like a broken record but I truly dig your work..simply awesome writing my friend.
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