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Time Collab With Jo

Every moment is fleeting fast
The present will soon become past
God has gifted this time to man
To live and use for a short span


All our life we wasted our time
We did not know this in our prime
Time is priceless not like a dime
We now have lived a full lifetime


Our clock slowly ticking away
Minutes and seconds not to stay
What's done for God is eternal
Infinite gift in life's journal


Wasted time what will we all pay
What words are now needed to say
Tell God we are sorry and pray
I hope heaven is on our way

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Sam Kauffman Date: 5/2/2023 10:15:00 AM Just lovely Paula! Congratulations on your win! Blessings as you invest your time in your poetic ministry! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/3/2023 11:53:00 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my write. I enjoyed writing this Time Collaboration. Have a blessed day................

Ann Peck Date: 5/2/2023 9:33:00 AM A lovely and gentle reminder of time's fleeting moments, Paula. Congratulations! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/3/2023 11:55:00 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this Time write/ Collaboration. Yes, time is on the run. It was fun to bring to life. Have a blessed day................

Valsa George Date: 5/2/2023 9:04:00 AM Back once again to congratulate you on your win. Stay blessed, dear Paula ! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/3/2023 11:51:00 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you came back and enjoy this write. Always good to see you here. Have a blessed day................

Beryl Edmonds Date: 5/2/2023 8:32:00 AM Paula this is a lovely collaboration between yourself and Joanna, we’ve all squandered time in our past, but we must look to the future and make every moment last. Congratulations on your win in the contest, you did it well ~ Belle Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/3/2023 11:50:00 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my write. I enjoyed writing this collaboration with Joanna. Yes, we need to look to the future and make every moment count. Have a blessed day................

Joanna Daniel Date: 5/2/2023 1:43:00 AM Nice one, Paula, congratulations:) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/2/2023 7:11:00 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my write. I enjoyed writing this collaboration with you. Thanks for the placement and for having this fun contest. Have a blessed day................

Unseeking Seeker Date: 4/4/2023 9:11:00 PM Blends in beautifully, as though written in a single breath! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/5/2023 7:08:00 AM Thank You for reading/writing. Your kind words made my day. Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this write/collaboration with Jo. Have a blessed day................

Valsa George Date: 4/3/2023 7:17:00 PM You have retained the tempo and tone of Jo's poem on Time. Beautiful collaboration . All the best dear friend Paula .... Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/4/2023 7:37:00 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your best.  Glad you enjoyed my write/collaboration. It was fun to do. Have a blessed day................

Len Gasun Date: 4/1/2023 11:09:00 AM This is so beautiful my dear poet friend Paula. I love the message, the flow and everything. I love this poem a whole lot and to my fave again. Best wishes in the contest my dearest poet friend although it's already a winner in my book. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/4/2023 7:17:00 AM Thank You for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you love my write. Hugs... Have a blessed day...................

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/31/2023 12:46:00 PM - You have done a brilliant job, Paula - Luck in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/31/2023 2:17:00 PM Thank You for reading/writing and for your luck. WOW!!! You say "brilliant job"??? Thanks so much that made my day. Hugs... Have a blessed day/weekend.........

Sam Kauffman Date: 3/31/2023 12:13:00 PM Paula, you have so beautifully blended your verses into Jo's poem. Your really maintained the intent and the feeling of the original poem. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings! Definitely NOT a "waste of time!" You have captured the treasure of time! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/31/2023 2:16:00 PM Thank You for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you feel I captured the treasure of time. This took extra time/thought to write. I enjoyed working on it. Have a blessed day/weekend............