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Time Spins People

So much growth just passes by While our hours are on the fly. Whether we grow and absorb Or miss each sight and single word, Our moment’s entire, total sum Is effected by each passing one. Time spins people in and out. Time may whisper, time may shout. It is not clear on any day Which memory will firmly stay, Which will take us and shake us Into all that’s a plus in us. What we do, changes us, What we don’t, also does. If no day seems brand new Perhaps your changes are too few. ... CayCay Jennings October 15, 2016

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Date: 6/10/2018 4:58:00 PM
Congratulations on a very well deserved win... Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/10/2018 12:09:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great win in "People" contest, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/23/2015 11:42:00 AM
I like this, CayCay! The last stanza holds a good message. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/1/2015 7:33:00 PM
Kim - thank you so much for sharing your response with me. I am thrilled that you liked the poem and took the time to tell me. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 11/21/2015 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations CayCay
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/1/2015 7:33:00 PM
Thank you, Nayda! All the best ... CayCay
Date: 11/20/2015 11:26:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb poetry Caycay!
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/1/2015 7:34:00 PM
I am so glad that you liked the poem. Thank you ... CayCay
Date: 11/20/2015 10:52:00 PM
CayCay, Congratulations on your wonderful OCTOBER win. I'm inviting you in hopes you enjoy my blog "I am the Pen" wrapping up October and its late winners :( Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/1/2015 7:32:00 PM
I'm sorry I missed the blog - I'm sure it was a good time. Thank you, Skat, for sponsoring the contest - I really appreciate all your efforts on Soup. Thank you ... CayCay
Date: 10/23/2015 9:30:00 AM
Very wise words of life indeed. Thank you for this share CayCay. 7+
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/1/2015 7:31:00 PM
Hey, my Cutie Pie! I miss you and must visit you soon. I'm so glad you liked the poem - thank you ... CayCay
Date: 10/18/2015 1:50:00 AM
Super reflection of time, I love the lines ' it's not clear on any day, what memory will firmly stay' - such true words, well done on this one A7 from me, kind regards Laura
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/18/2015 3:31:00 AM
I am delighted you liked my poem. Your comment was most appreciated and enjoyed! Thanks, Laura ... CayCay
Date: 10/17/2015 4:45:00 PM
Such truths beautifully penned... Love love love the last stanza!!!...
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Date: 10/17/2015 6:36:00 PM
Thank you, Arlene - I love, love, love, your upbeat comment. Thank you for sharing such encouraging enthusiasm ... CayCay (I think you may be newer than me, so welcome. If I am wrong, just ignore me.)
Date: 10/15/2015 10:36:00 PM
Very nice reflective write, Cay. Time is impartial. What we do with our time spells the difference. hugs!
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Date: 10/17/2015 6:38:00 PM
If we don't grow, we have wasted time - I know this. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, Kim. As always, I also thank you for the hug ... CayCay
Date: 10/15/2015 3:58:00 PM
This is wonderful, Caycay. sorry I am so late to see your newest poems. I never even commented to poems yesterday, but it was a wonderful day, as your poem discusses. We need to love every day!!!
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Date: 10/17/2015 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea ... CayCay
Date: 10/15/2015 3:02:00 PM
Time has always intrigued me, CayCay, and it appears that you have also been effected by it! Enjoyed your musing, especially the final two lines...if no day seems brand new, then ours would have been a waste of time! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 10/17/2015 6:40:00 PM
Time cares not for or about us, yet here we are, preoccupied with it! Thank you for commenting, now go write something exceptional! ... CayCay
Date: 10/15/2015 12:17:00 PM
Time changes everything, a brain tickler and a thought provoking write.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/17/2015 6:40:00 PM
Thank you, dear ... CayCay
Date: 10/15/2015 11:41:00 AM
This poem says things that point us to the path of self reflection with emotional markers that provide a starting point to our revaluations. Emile.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/17/2015 6:41:00 PM
I swear your comments are some of the best poetry on the site. I adore them. Thank you, CayCay
Date: 10/15/2015 10:00:00 AM
DEEP, INSIGHTFUL AND INSPIRING. Time, that which we never seem to have enough of! Very solid 7 on this one my friend. A7
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/17/2015 6:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Robert - I appreciate you ... CayCay

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