Time and Time Again

If anyone’s reading this poem, your somewhere in my past
       I’m in the future for these ‘right now' moments never last
         But still this is your present, such is the way time flows 
          All relative to the observer, every day comes and goes 

        So what am I doing right now, as your reading my poem 
       Perhaps going down a grave, most likely you’ll never know 
       We share the same planet, occupying two different worlds 
          One is in our head, the other one continuously unfurls 

         No matter how life is perceived, were merely passing time 
        That second hand keeps ticking, whilst hours happily chime 
         Seasons come and go, putting another birthday in the bag
        Our circadian clock slows down, toned faces inexorably sag

        Oh time that great leveller, eventually catches up with us all 
       Greatest force of nature, indifferent to light speed, or a crawl 
        Who started the clock ticking, or is all just radioactive decay 
       Countdown has only one direction, sorry there’s no other way 

         So onwards and upwards, past the stratosphere we will go
        Back to where it all started, about fourteen billion years ago
        And then what happens, that’s what you really want to know
      I’ll let you in on the secret, perhaps not, will only spoil the show 


''T'' Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest
   Sponsored by: Constance La France
06/11/21

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Date: 11/11/2021 10:10:00 AM
David, congratulations on your win in my "T" Contest ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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David Kavanagh
Date: 11/11/2021 12:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Constance, I fully appreciate your placement, cheers David
Date: 5/27/2021 12:43:00 PM
WoW! David, What a well-written, clever write. I'm glad I took the time to read you today. I don't think I ever read a piece about “ time” quite like this before. I found it deep and profound. The fact that you didn't reveal the “ secret” was good. It left the reader thinking about your poem long after they finished reading it. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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David Kavanagh
Date: 5/27/2021 1:33:00 PM
I’m delighted Alexis you found the time to read me today, I tend to go down the rabbit hole, when musing time, right back before the Big Bang and creation into infinity, and then fast forward to beyond death into infinity again, and I find both ends meet up into a möbius loop of sorts, in my mind anyway, cheers David
Date: 5/26/2021 12:01:00 PM
Glad I found the time to read this clever write in your past and my present..and now my past. I may have to re-read it in the future. Cheers - Gary
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David Kavanagh
Date: 5/26/2021 12:21:00 PM
Ha, at least I’m not going down a grave this time whilst you read it, I’m absolutely fascinated by time, not even so much human history, but more so the whole cosmic incredulity of it, cheers David
Date: 5/26/2021 8:45:00 AM
Well said, David, your imagery and word choice are outstanding; as I mentioned, I can't help but peruse your poems. My best wishes for a win.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 5/26/2021 10:15:00 AM
Heya Lasaad, I’m delighted your reading my musings, I found this one very enjoyable to write, some of the other forms I do struggle with, cheers David
Date: 5/25/2021 1:42:00 PM
I know one thing for sure I'll read your excellent poetry time and time again as regularly as clockwork!:-) write on my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2021 4:23:00 PM
for 'relative time' google dr john talyor a most fascinating man indeed his clocks are amazing:-) hugs jan xx
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David Kavanagh
Date: 5/25/2021 2:17:00 PM
Why thank you so much Jan, I could never resist a contest about time, it definitely is all relative to us observers, cheers David
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