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I got inspired to write this poem from a sermon by my senior Pastor of my church.  The semon was on Leviticus 20, and the date was January 15, 2017.

Time Alone With God

When everyday life overwhelms you,
And you find it hard to enjoy peace of mind,
When you cannot cope with the stresses of life
And you want to leave all of your troubles behind,
But you cannot flee from your adversities
If you focus on worldly desires,
And any form of earthly addiction
Will not bring you any peace of mind,
So don't worry about any misfortune,
Take everything to God in Prayer, 
Kneel down before his presence, 
And leave your burdens there,
And in stillness of the hour
You can feel his quiet power,
In a prayer and meditation hour.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/24/2017 2:25:00 PM
Beautifully written. Subtle rhymes that are so natural. Lovely message too. Great write Don!
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Date: 8/23/2017 7:20:00 PM
Don: HE appreciates your words as do many on the soup. Thanks for sharing with us. Well done, good and faithful servant. :o) oldbuck
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Date: 8/13/2017 5:00:00 AM
There would be more peace in the world if people would have a 1Peter 5:7 day, which says 'cast all your cares upon Him, for He cares for you.' Then as we say in Australia 'no worries mate'
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Don Pettinelli
Date: 8/15/2017 11:33:00 AM
People are always searching for God to ease the storms in their lives. What they don't realize he is as close as getting down on their knees in prayer. Thank you for your comments and for liking my Poetry. Have a blessed day!
Date: 7/29/2017 5:03:00 PM
Such a lovely piece Don, great reminder for us all to be much in prayer. God bless, Gordon
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Don Pettinelli
Date: 8/15/2017 11:47:00 AM
Thank you for liking my Poetry. Life is A journey and as believers we know this is not our home. There will be a later time when we will find peace and understanding together with the Lord. Hebrews 3:14.
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