Time Or Death

Time hasn't taken from us what he would not give to it,
time  doesn't take from  us what we  didn't give to him,
Time  doesn't snatch  from our hands what we sincerely protected,
And yet death requires no authority to take  from man what is cherished;
When man has launched war  against his fellow man,
When oblivion has stripped  me off of family.

Oh! take from me what  is precious
but do not rob off of my childhood
For  while  this time may pass me by 
we will catch up -
-with the wonderful memories of our past in future,
Yet if the darkness and  coldness of grave has encompassed me,
How would I remember the days of my innocence?
Cant the wise declare war  against death? 
For  even if time passed,
And we wailed away our  hurt,
When old  age approaches, 
With irretrievable deformity:
That snatches sight from eyes,
Strength from knees to carry me,
Withe  the De-coloring of my hair
When  memory deflects to oblivion
Not  out of choice but incapacity to fight for my life
And the shades of my side surge breath off of my nostrils  
I chose death over time 
That it may be held liable for murder,
For  death has snuggle into the hands of time
To disregard old-age 
And take from man what is of value
Take the wise  and leave the world to obliterate  
Of the young and unwise 
Until the  world goes to ruin
and so like  the hopeless romantics on  screen played episodes
I write that:
"When you see the falling  tears 
Know that today is the day i  am  allowed to cry"
Not out of  strength 
But out of the weakness of my heart 
its OK for me to crush glasses
and burn favorite letters
It's OK  if i  got to  sleep without food
It's  of if remain sunken, sulking till  dawn 
It's OK if i spent sleepless nights wondering  who will care for  me
Because i refuse to blame time that has had  us build so many wonderful memories With  my  loved one
I hold it against death for though he taken so much  
His greed wont grant him satisfaction;
So when u see  the falling tears,
Know  that today its okay  for me to cry!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/25/2016 11:28:00 PM
Nice to see this one again, Eclidah, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2016 12:59:00 PM
hope to see you back this year 2016
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Date: 10/22/2015 3:04:00 AM
- Hello Eclidah :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/21/2015 9:53:00 PM
Eclidah, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/22/2015 12:36:00 PM
thank you so very much... you are too kind i already love this community
Date: 10/21/2015 9:12:00 PM
Eclidah, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2015 12:38:00 PM
love you already SKAT i just have to get familier details on ma wall there are so many of t hem and i dont how to do what and soon as that is over you will be my first friend. and thank you so very much for your kindness
Date: 10/21/2015 8:22:00 AM
Eclidah, what a wonderful and meaningful first write on poetry soup, I rate this 7, and thanks so much for visiting my poem, autumn views and welcome to poetry soup ~~
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:33:00 PM
Thank you so very much and because you are the first to comment here you just given me a go ahead.. i really feel welcome. you poem is simply incredible... if only i could write like you
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