Time and Place

TIME   AND   PLACE


Spring is found in the Lowland valleys with gowan-filled braes of Scotland
When the early-reaching flowers bloom in cool freshness,  and
The air is bracing and always new-washed-glass clean  -
With the Ochils in  the background green,
Willing us, begging us  --  Come to the heather hills, please  !
Around Ben Lomond, they perfume the breeze
With memories of Bruce and Wallace 
And feel young in our face.


Summer is a thousand-mile southbound road-trip heading
To Yellowstone through Montana and Wyoming,
With 104F degree air gushing in the vent,
And dinner in the Angel Inn, where we went
For a chicken smorgasbord snack
And a cool six pack.


Autumn is a Saskatchewan garden with leaves singing,
Tenacious against a hissing wind; and  clinging
Above the grass, feeling the ice-chilled bite,
Anticipating a coming  gown of white.


Winter is cold with lots of snow:
Moscow.

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20  August  2014

Notes:

Gowan = small daisy-like flower
Brae = riverbank
Ochils  = Ochil  Hills, a lovely upland part of the Forth Valley
Bruce and Wallace  = famous Scots  heroes in history
Angel  Inn   is near  Casper,  WY
Moscow  - capital of Russia

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/30/2014 9:49:00 AM
Inspiring words! Congratulations on your win!!!
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Date: 8/29/2014 9:55:00 PM
this is so interesting, taking us from country to country from season to season. A very inventive way to do the contest. Awesome and congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/29/2014 8:19:00 PM
This is very different, something I always appreciate...Congrats to you..BG
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Date: 8/29/2014 7:15:00 PM
Sidney, I am appreciating your writing very much. Beautiful description rolling off your pen. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/29/2014 6:39:00 PM
I loved that I was able to be an "arm-chair traveler"......right along side ....and you paid my fare !! Thank you!!! A great trip and as always a wonderful poem!
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Date: 8/29/2014 6:21:00 PM
I like your writing, and I very much liked the way you did this; good use of rhyme and effective descriptions, a very well written piece - congrats on your win in my contest
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