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At the mercy of your merciless father, his hands have no kindness. They glide over you painfully uttering all your past transgressions in a slanderous out of rythm tune. Your father holds tightly the wisdom that is your key. He painstakingly strokes every wound, controlling you with unbearable propulsion. He grows old with with you, absent, elusive, a luxury not to be squandered. In the end he has one cherrished mortal decision. No respect for your illusion. As you waiver between realities and your earthly tree of life begins its slumber, Your fathers icy breath blows through the withered leaves, screaming your deception to all with sublime exquisitness. The now brittle leaves gracefully take their last journey. Eyes closed. Deep sigh. Even your father cannot reverse the glory of relief, like so many stolen moments over the seasons. Slowly slipping through your fathers grasp until finally your soul discovers release from that which imprisons all man.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/20/2014 10:18:00 AM
This is an excellent piece Cheri and is especially appreciated by someone who is dealing with a controlling father Time. Congratulations on your poem being featured! Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Cheri Burtovoy
Date: 1/20/2014 10:51:00 PM
Thank you SO much, I am always honored and excited to be appreciated :)
Date: 1/1/2014 4:09:00 PM
Hope you are enjoying the first day of the year... Cheri, I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Cheri Burtovoy
Date: 1/20/2014 10:54:00 PM
My apologies for the delayed response. Thank you for the warm welcome to Poetry Soup :) Please keep reading....
Date: 12/31/2013 6:30:00 AM
Cheri, wow, deep. .. , Hope you are enjoying the New Year holidays, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, This is deep!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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Cheri Burtovoy
Date: 1/20/2014 10:56:00 PM
I apologize for not responding sooner. Thank you for welcoming me to Poetry Soup and giving me such a nice comment...I look forward to reading and hearing more :)
Date: 12/31/2013 2:21:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Cheri ! - A very nice poem, well done !! :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a lovely day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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