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Time

Time is a train speeding down a track Never braking, never stopping, never to look back.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Cynthia Alvez
Date: 9/9/2012 11:26:00 PM
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The "WOW" factor! Love it! Cynthia
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/6/2012 3:31:00 PM
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so very very true. love your personification of time. Congrats on the win.
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Robert Pettit
Date: 9/5/2012 10:05:00 PM
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If time is like a speeding train, then mine is going to derail any day now. Good analogy of time to a nonstop train.
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Cindy Cayton
Date: 9/5/2012 9:37:00 PM
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~and it picks up momentum after 35, if you look back, it's like whhhewww! that was a rush! LOL good poetry, short from but alot said in a few words, Cindy
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Debra Falgout
Date: 9/5/2012 8:12:00 PM
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A lady once told me, once you make a decision don't change it, never look back, good advice, congrats on your poem, love debra
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Date: 9/5/2012 7:30:00 PM
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JONATHAN, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/5/2012 5:51:00 PM
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How true! Congrats on your win, Jonathan! Love, Kim
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 9/5/2012 2:22:00 PM
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Love the train metaphor! Congrats...:))
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 9/5/2012 7:11:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Time" contest Jonathan. Love, Carol
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Vicky Tsiluma
Date: 9/4/2012 11:39:00 AM
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I like this! Never looking back - that's time alright. Congrats Jonathan!
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/4/2012 10:21:00 AM
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Very nice and big congratulations Jonathan xx
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Cindy Cayton
Date: 9/2/2012 4:16:00 AM
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wow! very GOOD!!!! Cindy Lu
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