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Time

Years
devolve
becoming
fragmented time
scattering moments
across lifetimes 
in final
exhaled
breaths

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Gershon Wolf

September 10, 2022 at 7:42 PM

Nice picture-poem combo, Linda. Images of 'The Time Machine' movie come to mind. :) gw

Linda Alice Fowler

September 11, 2022 at 8:09 AM

hmmm...interesting. May be a poem in there somewhere :0 Have a good day gw. laf

Andrea Dietrich

September 9, 2022 at 8:09 PM

a wonderful and profound ninette. Hard to accomplish in such limited lines.

Linda Alice Fowler

September 10, 2022 at 5:43 AM

Thank you Andrea. Thank you for reading and commenting. I know time is precious to you right now. Linda

Sotto Poet

September 9, 2022 at 6:38 PM

So thought stimulating and stunning! Gorgeous Ninette, Linda! Have a fantastic weekend!

Linda Alice Fowler

September 10, 2022 at 5:42 AM

Thank you Lasaad! I appreciate your very kind words. Linda

Rico Leffanta

September 9, 2022 at 11:55 AM

God says we inhale the breath of life, but our final exhaust is usually putrid so good thing we are gone by then! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Linda Alice Fowler

September 9, 2022 at 12:46 PM

Thankfully, yes! Thanks for the stop by Rico. Enjoy your weekend! Linda

Sara Kendrick

September 9, 2022 at 9:23 AM

Truth written in this one. I enjoyed reading it today. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

September 9, 2022 at 10:22 AM

Thank you Sara. I pray all is going better for you. Linda

Victor Buhagiar

September 9, 2022 at 6:47 AM

Beautiful Ninette. Think deep about it.

Michael Tor

September 8, 2022 at 8:34 PM

Love this poem by you Linda so true your words. Our lives are like a vapor the Bible states and it is true, before you know it it has passed you by. Thanks for posting and be blessed my Dear...

Linda Alice Fowler

September 9, 2022 at 5:56 AM

Good morning Michael. Many thanks for your visit and thoughtful comments. Linda