Time

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Years
devolve
becoming
fragmented time
scattering moments
across lifetimes 
in final
exhaled
breaths

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/10/2022 7:42:00 PM

Nice picture-poem combo, Linda. Images of 'The Time Machine' movie come to mind. :) gw

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/11/2022 8:09:00 AM

hmmm...interesting. May be a poem in there somewhere :0 Have a good day gw. laf

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2022 8:09:00 PM

a wonderful and profound ninette. Hard to accomplish in such limited lines.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/10/2022 5:43:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. Thank you for reading and commenting. I know time is precious to you right now. Linda

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/9/2022 6:38:00 PM

So thought stimulating and stunning! Gorgeous Ninette, Linda! Have a fantastic weekend!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/10/2022 5:42:00 AM

Thank you Lasaad! I appreciate your very kind words. Linda

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/9/2022 11:55:00 AM

God says we inhale the breath of life, but our final exhaust is usually putrid so good thing we are gone by then! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/9/2022 12:46:00 PM

Thankfully, yes! Thanks for the stop by Rico. Enjoy your weekend! Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2022 9:23:00 AM

Truth written in this one. I enjoyed reading it today. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/9/2022 10:22:00 AM

Thank you Sara. I pray all is going better for you. Linda

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/9/2022 6:47:00 AM

Beautiful Ninette. Think deep about it.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/8/2022 8:34:00 PM

Love this poem by you Linda so true your words. Our lives are like a vapor the Bible states and it is true, before you know it it has passed you by. Thanks for posting and be blessed my Dear...

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/9/2022 5:56:00 AM

Good morning Michael. Many thanks for your visit and thoughtful comments. Linda