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Years devolve becoming fragmented time scattering moments across lifetimes in final exhaled breaths

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Date: 9/10/2022 7:42:00 PM
Nice picture-poem combo, Linda. Images of 'The Time Machine' movie come to mind. :) gw
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/11/2022 8:09:00 AM
hmmm...interesting. May be a poem in there somewhere :0 Have a good day gw. laf
Date: 9/9/2022 8:09:00 PM
a wonderful and profound ninette. Hard to accomplish in such limited lines.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/10/2022 5:43:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. Thank you for reading and commenting. I know time is precious to you right now. Linda
Date: 9/9/2022 6:38:00 PM
So thought stimulating and stunning! Gorgeous Ninette, Linda! Have a fantastic weekend!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/10/2022 5:42:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad! I appreciate your very kind words. Linda
Date: 9/9/2022 11:55:00 AM
God says we inhale the breath of life, but our final exhaust is usually putrid so good thing we are gone by then! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/9/2022 12:46:00 PM
Thankfully, yes! Thanks for the stop by Rico. Enjoy your weekend! Linda
Date: 9/9/2022 9:23:00 AM
Truth written in this one. I enjoyed reading it today. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/9/2022 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Sara. I pray all is going better for you. Linda
Date: 9/9/2022 6:47:00 AM
Beautiful Ninette. Think deep about it.
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Date: 9/8/2022 8:34:00 PM
Love this poem by you Linda so true your words. Our lives are like a vapor the Bible states and it is true, before you know it it has passed you by. Thanks for posting and be blessed my Dear...
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/9/2022 5:56:00 AM
Good morning Michael. Many thanks for your visit and thoughtful comments. Linda
Date: 9/8/2022 7:56:00 PM
So thought provoking and beautiful ! Beautiful ninette, Linda! Have a great week end!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/9/2022 5:54:00 AM
Thanks for the nice words Valsa! Linda
Date: 9/8/2022 5:26:00 PM
Excellent poem, Linda. Clear thought in just nine lines. Bravo! Have a great weekend my friend! Bill
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/9/2022 5:54:00 AM
Thanks Bill. I appreciate your visit and comments. Linda
Date: 9/8/2022 4:36:00 PM
well done, linda! you've said so much in just a few words...
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/9/2022 5:53:00 AM
Many thanks Ilene! Linda
Date: 9/8/2022 2:06:00 PM
Good use of the form!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 9/8/2022 4:05:00 PM
Thanks Jeff! L

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