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The Moment of Bliss

Time is endless - that’s what they say!  When I meet you, doesn’t feel like the clock is ticking,  the moment is fleeting,  too fast!  The past feels serene and eternal,  Never leaves my pensive mind.  The present is alluring and infinite,  Never loses its limitless charm!  For Time - 8-word challenge Poetry Contest Sponsor - A Dear Heart

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Date: 7/15/2020 11:43:00 AM
So! Enjoyed Past and Present Infinite. Good Concept. Congrats.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/17/2020 5:44:00 AM
Thanks, Anisha. Appreciate your thoughtful comments. Best wishes, Mala
Date: 7/11/2020 1:07:00 AM
This is enjoyable. Nice poem Ray
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/11/2020 8:33:00 PM
Thank you, Phred. Appreciate your inspiring comment. Mala
Date: 7/7/2020 4:51:00 PM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my time contest _Constance
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/9/2020 1:00:00 PM
Thanks, Constance. Your theme was very interesting!
Date: 7/7/2020 2:31:00 PM
Lovely words Mala. Time manages to allure us to travel back and forth between past and present. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/9/2020 1:03:00 PM
Thanks, Aditi. So true - Time allures us!
Date: 7/7/2020 5:59:00 AM
Never loses its limitless charm.. Lovely write Malabika.. Congrats..
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/7/2020 6:06:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend, glad you liked this very short poem! Best wishes, Mala
Date: 7/6/2020 11:18:00 PM
Mala, a lovely ode to the here and now. You used the 8 chosen words in a very compact space with natural flow and deep meaning. Congrats on your win, my friend ~ John
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John Watt
Date: 7/7/2020 8:11:00 PM
I find it more impressive because of how compact it was. No unnecessary words. Loved it!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/7/2020 6:05:00 AM
Hi John, my poem was probably too compact! I got excited with the challenge of using eight chosen words. Thank you, always. Mala
Date: 7/5/2020 6:43:00 PM
Hello Maya, you have captured this poem very well. Enjoy your evening my friend. love , Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2020 2:08:00 PM
Hello Maya, I am proud of you winning the contest. Love Darlene Enjoy your day my friend. Love Darlene.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/6/2020 5:41:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene. Glad you liked the poem. Love, Mala
Date: 7/5/2020 6:10:00 AM
Nice one. Kind wishes, Kai
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/5/2020 7:07:00 AM
Thanks, Dear Poet. Appreciate your comment.
Date: 7/5/2020 6:10:00 AM
Nice one. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 7/4/2020 9:57:00 PM
We all need to learn to revere the present. A nice reminder.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/5/2020 7:06:00 AM
Thank you, Caren. Lovely thoughts.
Date: 7/4/2020 6:17:00 PM
Very nice!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/4/2020 6:24:00 PM
Thanks, Susan. Appreciate reading my poem.