The Moment of Bliss

Time is endless - that’s what they say! When I meet you, In the gossamer amber twilight... sun leaving, painting the sky with a glistening vermillion aura, feels like the clock is ticking, the moment is fleeting, too fast! The golden past feels celestially serene and eternal, Never escapes my crimson-hued mind. The present is intoxicating and infinite, Never loses its blazing, limitless charm! For Time - 8-word challenge Poetry Contest Sponsor - A Dear Heart

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/15/2020 11:43:00 AM

So! Enjoyed Past and Present Infinite. Good Concept. Congrats.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/17/2020 5:44:00 AM

Thanks, Anisha. Appreciate your thoughtful comments. Best wishes, Mala

Phred Sirikye

Date: 7/11/2020 1:07:00 AM

This is enjoyable. Nice poem Ray

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/11/2020 8:33:00 PM

Thank you, Phred. Appreciate your inspiring comment. Mala

Constance La France

Date: 7/7/2020 4:51:00 PM

Mala, congratulations on your win in my time contest _Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/9/2020 1:00:00 PM

Thanks, Constance. Your theme was very interesting!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/7/2020 2:31:00 PM

Lovely words Mala. Time manages to allure us to travel back and forth between past and present. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/9/2020 1:03:00 PM

Thanks, Aditi. So true - Time allures us!

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/7/2020 5:59:00 AM

Never loses its limitless charm.. Lovely write Malabika.. Congrats..

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/7/2020 6:06:00 AM

Thank you, dear friend, glad you liked this very short poem! Best wishes, Mala

John Watt

Date: 7/6/2020 11:18:00 PM

Mala, a lovely ode to the here and now. You used the 8 chosen words in a very compact space with natural flow and deep meaning. Congrats on your win, my friend ~ John

John Watt
Date: 7/7/2020 8:11:00 PM

I find it more impressive because of how compact it was. No unnecessary words. Loved it!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/7/2020 6:05:00 AM

Hi John, my poem was probably too compact! I got excited with the challenge of using eight chosen words. Thank you, always. Mala