Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Free verse

The Moment of Bliss

Time is endless - that’s what they say! 

When I meet you, 
In the gossamer amber twilight...
sun leaving, painting the sky 
with a glistening vermillion aura, 
feels like the clock is ticking, 
the moment is fleeting, 
too fast! 

The golden past feels celestially serene and eternal, 
Never escapes my crimson-hued mind. 

The present is intoxicating and infinite, 
Never loses its blazing, limitless charm! 


For Time - 8-word challenge Poetry Contest
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Anisha Dutta July 15, 2020 at 11:43 AM So! Enjoyed Past and Present Infinite. Good Concept. Congrats. Malabika Ray Choudhury July 17, 2020 at 5:44 AM Thanks, Anisha. Appreciate your thoughtful comments. Best wishes, Mala

Phred Sirikye July 11, 2020 at 1:07 AM This is enjoyable. Nice poem Ray Malabika Ray Choudhury July 11, 2020 at 8:33 PM Thank you, Phred. Appreciate your inspiring comment. Mala

Constance La France July 7, 2020 at 4:51 PM Mala, congratulations on your win in my time contest _Constance Malabika Ray Choudhury July 9, 2020 at 1:00 PM Thanks, Constance. Your theme was very interesting!

Aditi Mishra July 7, 2020 at 2:31 PM Lovely words Mala. Time manages to allure us to travel back and forth between past and present. Congratulations on your win. Much love :) Malabika Ray Choudhury July 9, 2020 at 1:03 PM Thanks, Aditi. So true - Time allures us!

Jenish Somadas July 7, 2020 at 5:59 AM Never loses its limitless charm.. Lovely write Malabika.. Congrats.. Malabika Ray Choudhury July 7, 2020 at 6:06 AM Thank you, dear friend, glad you liked this very short poem! Best wishes, Mala

John Watt July 6, 2020 at 11:18 PM Mala, a lovely ode to the here and now. You used the 8 chosen words in a very compact space with natural flow and deep meaning. Congrats on your win, my friend ~ John John Watt July 7, 2020 at 8:11 PM I find it more impressive because of how compact it was. No unnecessary words. Loved it! Malabika Ray Choudhury July 7, 2020 at 6:05 AM Hi John, my poem was probably too compact! I got excited with the challenge of using eight chosen words. Thank you, always. Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu July 5, 2020 at 6:43 PM Hello Maya, you have captured this poem very well. Enjoy your evening my friend. love , Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu July 7, 2020 at 2:08 PM Hello Maya, I am proud of you winning the contest. Love Darlene Enjoy your day my friend. Love Darlene. Malabika Ray Choudhury July 6, 2020 at 5:41 PM Thanks, Darlene. Glad you liked the poem. Love, Mala

Kai Michael Neumann July 5, 2020 at 6:10 AM Nice one. Kind wishes, Kai

Kai Michael Neumann July 5, 2020 at 6:10 AM Nice one. Kind wishes, Kai Malabika Ray Choudhury July 5, 2020 at 7:07 AM Thanks, Dear Poet. Appreciate your comment.

Caren Krutsinger July 4, 2020 at 9:57 PM We all need to learn to revere the present. A nice reminder. Malabika Ray Choudhury July 5, 2020 at 7:06 AM Thank you, Caren. Lovely thoughts.

Susan Woodrow July 4, 2020 at 6:17 PM Very nice! Malabika Ray Choudhury July 4, 2020 at 6:24 PM Thanks, Susan. Appreciate reading my poem.