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Within oppressive oblivious organisms, a tyrannical tormentor here lies; Amidst the scheming sinister schisms, another moment within us dies… Reflecting resistance upon dualisms, the chasm clock brings our demise; Where present perpendicular prisms, create illusions in their disguise. Barbarian black holes in their abyss, ruins of ticking tyrants regurgitate; Annihilator’s of the past in their bliss, for time devours all to recreate… Death and destruction a Judas kiss, as the giants gorge and alienate; In purgatory, we shall reminisce, forever’s are gone as they separate… A chronological continuance abides, escaping from the eternal abode; Thoughts lost as destiny divides, infinite space sequestered to erode… Dreams dormant the universe slides, consciousness begins to corrode; I shall soon disappear with the tides, for my words will now implode. June.30.2020 Time- 8 Word Challenge Sponsored by~ A Dear Heart Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Date: 7/7/2020 5:46:00 PM
Congrats on your TOP win my friend--well done, WW.
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Date: 7/7/2020 4:25:00 PM
WW, congratulations on your win in my time contest, excellent writing and a FAV for me, and I like the reading and the video too _Constance
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Date: 7/7/2020 1:56:00 PM
I hope someday I'll be able to learn to use alliteration so beautifully like you do WW! Congratulations on a splendid win ^_^ Blessings and hugs :)
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Date: 7/7/2020 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I am always amazed by your pen. Where can I find a pen like you have?????? Enjoy your win and day............
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Date: 7/7/2020 7:02:00 AM
You have a astute affinity for alliteration, Winged Warrior. :) Congratulations and cheers!
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Date: 7/7/2020 1:53:00 AM
Brilliantly composed as always, W^W, hats-off to your amazing mastery of applying repetitious sounding words, and my compliments truly for your admirable efforts in achieving 1st place, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/7/2020 12:15:00 AM
Back with congrats Winged Warrior.. Great win..
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Date: 7/2/2020 10:25:00 PM
Bro bro I wanted to enter this contest but lol not after reading this piece....simply amazing!;)
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Date: 7/2/2020 8:15:00 PM
Great write Wingster, The first stanza was my favorite..best wishes
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Date: 7/2/2020 12:10:00 PM
You're the ultimate king of alliteration, WW:-) This is just outstanding, as usual!
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Date: 7/2/2020 8:29:00 AM
Wow! This is excellent. Well written WW!
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Date: 7/1/2020 8:38:00 PM
No one, WW, and I mean NO ONE, can do the alliterative things you do! Wow. I'm always amazed by the elasticity and 'gymnasticity' (new word, there) of your lines. ~ Not so Agile Al
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Date: 7/1/2020 12:40:00 PM
as i reflect on the words you speak....your sentiments are so unique....our world is full of problems....and it seems our leaders wont try to stop em....so it is on us, we are the front lines....Love is just one of the options, Thank God It's mine....great write ww....
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Date: 7/1/2020 3:17:00 AM
Very cleverly done. Time will not stop but goes on forever.
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Date: 7/1/2020 1:53:00 AM
You are a master of alliteration.. Great write WW.. Good luck..
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