Time

The lonely eyes of my saddest heart
understands time feels eternal
unlike a ticking clock
past and present never seem to move
Every moment is here and gone
one after another...vanishing without motion
as they form infinite realities in an imagined world
        Where songbirds once sang
before my hollowed-out eyes crossed the boundaries of emptiness
seeking refuge from the darkest days
        that haunt my heart's yesterdays
When it lays restless under the stars of lost nights
and crawls with its memories
through the empty shell of my soul
holding flickering ash in the orb of my eyes
to light, the dark filled path deep within my heart
          so I may see your face
painted on its tear-stained walls from memory 



6/30/20 contest Time-8 word challenge
words... time, moment, clock, ticking
past, present, eternal, infinite
sponsor Dear Heart
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Hamilton Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 8:07 AM
Congrats Frederic on another top win, this flows so easily using the prescribed words seamlessly.
La France Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 4:23 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my time contest, excellent writing and a FAV for me, and I love the music and video too_Constance
Mishra Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 1:54 PM
This is beautiful yet sad and heartfelt Frederic. Brilliant flow of emotions in your muse. Congratulations on your win! :)
Logan Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 7:11 AM
Your emotional lines held my interest until the end, Frederic. Thinking that time "crawls with its memories through the empty shell of my soul" Your poem is worthy of a first place.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 1:42 AM
Fantastically expressed, Frederic, a wealth of powerful well-chosen words, and my compliments for your enriching efforts achieving 1st Place, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William
Somadas Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 12:14 AM
painted on its tear-stained walls from memory..Sad but beautifully written Frederic.. Congrats on your great win..
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 8:26 PM
Wow, love this, Frederic! Beautiful words, deep thoughts. powerful emotion. A fave...GL in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Sands Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 12:50 PM
Beautifully written Frederic! :)
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