Time

time... it moves like these leaves flying by in this wind too fast for me to catch not even my own breath

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/1/2020 1:21:00 PM

I picture you running to catch Time, and almost… but always beyond your reach. Well-penned my friend! :) Gershon

Sandra Adams
Date: 3/1/2020 1:31:00 PM

catching time is about as hard as catching the wind between your fingers...hugs

Silent One

Date: 2/29/2020 10:08:00 AM

Time time time what has become of me..... Are you talking about what I think.... It catches up with us after a while my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/29/2020 9:43:00 PM

I have just been so busy I have no time to even think much less write or read most days... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 2/28/2020 4:23:00 PM

Wow, sounds like someone needs a vacation. : ) Loved this Sandy. It is always nice to slow down and read something from you.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/28/2020 6:45:00 PM

Thank you Chris...I will be getting a 3 day vacation soon, but not a fun one...so I guess I will have to look forward to spring break... hugs

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 2/28/2020 3:31:00 PM

Nice one Sandy, indeed time goes too fast to hold on to it. Blessings, Gordon

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/28/2020 6:44:00 PM

Thank you Gordon...it surely does... sometimes way too fast when you are to busy to stop and smell the roses... hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/28/2020 7:04:00 AM

Well said, Sandy--it passes by fast.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/28/2020 10:04:00 AM

Thank you Vijay...it sure does...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/28/2020 12:53:00 AM

So true Sandra, and it waits for no one. Tom

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/28/2020 5:11:00 AM

That’s the truth Tom and you can never make up minutes lost. Hugs

John Watt

Date: 2/28/2020 12:42:00 AM

You always use nature so exquisitely, Sandra. Beautiful and wistful reflection. Hugs ~ John

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/28/2020 5:10:00 AM

Thank you John. Before I started writing poetry I looked at nature to lift my spirits and spent much time among it as a child ... hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/27/2020 11:34:00 PM

WoW! Sandra, Good free verse on time. Your ending was deep. Well done. Have a good evening:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/28/2020 5:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis Sometimes life is too busy to catch even your breath. Have a great day my friend. Hugs

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/27/2020 9:16:00 PM

Lovely, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/28/2020 5:08:00 AM

Thank you Line

Jan Allison

Date: 2/27/2020 9:01:00 PM

oh so true Sandra -super free verse I love it!:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/28/2020 5:08:00 AM

Thank you Jan. Sometimes things get so crazy busy you can stop and catch your breath ... hugs