Time- Like Feathers, Fly

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(New version of a poem posted in 2016, using another poetry form).
Entered January 28, 2025
In The Premiere Contest, “Time Stops For No One”
Sponsor, Sara Jama

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Where have the years gone: 
like soft feathers
they float in the breeze of life;
fragile, wispy thoughts
to gather in, one by one 
and stroke with loving care,
smoothing edges
ruffled in their years of flight.

Feathers of our memory-
they fly faster as we age;
time has learned a new step
spinning us around.
Feathers held just yesterday-
grasped from us so fast
before we comprehend
their colors and designs.

Relish each moment
lest the thief of time 
deems feathers fly no more.
Caress the silky texture;
smooth the separated vanes
to flawless beauty
before they are whisked away-
from memories- or soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 1/30/2025 8:03:00 PM
You caught the wings of the fleeting time so well, Sandra. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/28/2025 9:30:00 AM
Good one, Sandra. I enjoyed reading it. Sara K..Seems like I remember it from the other posting.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/28/2025 12:35:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. Yes, I posted these thoughts using the Choka form back in 2016. I sometimes like to rewrite my thoughts about the same idea or emotion using a different poetry form. Hugs, Sandra
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